.Lost Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 had to write a poem. It gets insane, when a lyricist passes my membraneGetting closer and closer just to gain fame n shameHis claims; are different and funked upWashed out; broken and torn stuffBut even though, his ego is differentHe feels like me, and therefore can fit inHe's an outcast, feeling alone in the distanceSeparated, from all the men and womenLyrically, he can be considered a legendBut now, i'll see him in heaven. May aswell, ya kno? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 lol i didnt need to take freshman comp, Go Career Centers. also there is a thread for poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 *doesn't care to read poem*Not enough energy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 lol i didnt need to take freshman comp' date=' Go Career Centers. also there is a thread for poems[/quote'] x_x forgot. *doesn't care to read poem*Not enough energy. Why thank you good sir <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 lol i didnt need to take freshman comp' date=' Go Career Centers. also there is a thread for poems[/quote'] x_x forgot. *doesn't care to read poem*Not enough energy. Why thank you good sir <3 At the very least, I posted, recognizing that a poem did exist in your post =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 <3 Bump btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 You got some mad rhymes in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Here is a better one:I'm the HiphoppopotamusFlows they glow like phosphorousBursting out the top of this esophagus Rocking this metropolisI ain't some large water-dwelling mammalWhere'd you get that preposterous hypothesis?Did Steve tell you perchance?Hm... Steve... But seriously, your poem could be better, keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 We should battle sometime. <3Btw, 5th and 7th lines kinda ruined it, imo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Use this thread, k?http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-148457.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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