hollowmaster999 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Yeah, but lately I love making OP cards, so here there are: [spoiler=Effect]1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monstersEvery time this card battles, put Justice Counters on this card equal to the other monster's level (max 30). This gains a different effect for the number of Justice Counters on it:. 10+ This card gains 500ATK. 20+ This card cannot be destroyed by Trap cards. 30 This card can attack twice each Battle Phase They might be OP, but I don't know... Well, anyway, comment/suggest/rate, huh. Pictures on Deviant Art, credit is on the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Hmm, I like it. Golden Crown Pic is blurry but other than that 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 On "Defender of Justice - Machel", when you're listing the Synchro materials (or whatever they're called for Synchros), don't put the s in "monsters" in parentheses, especially since you said that you need 2 or more, so it has to be plural. Change "equal to the monster's level" to "equal to that monster's level" , and capitalize "Trap" and "Battle Phase". On "The Last Resort - Golden Crown", change "is not destroyed" to "cannot be destroyed" and change the last sentence to "During your End Phase, take damage equal to the ATK of the monster you Summoned x3." Like Glass said, Golden Crown's pic is pretty blurry. Otherwise, they're nice, and I think they're actually pretty well balanced since you can potentially take a lot of damage from Golden Crown and it would take 10 turns for Machel's effect to come into play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Oh, thanks for the OCG, yaim. Must've missed that. I'll make the changes right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 easy to get the counters on the synchro. For 20+ I'd change the effect so it can't be DESTROYED by traps 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Eh? Oh, I thought I had written that. M'kay, I'll make the change. Thanks for that, and the rate :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JinzoLord Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 HEY HOLLOWMASTER999 I GAVE YOU A 7/10ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha haha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha HOLLOWMASTER999 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 that's better. Now I'll raise the rate to 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Some ocg errors and the Golden crown's pic is blurry 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Some ocg errors and the Golden crown's pic is blurry 6/10 So the pic is a bit blurry, and "some OCG errors" so you give it a 6? That doesn't seem likely. Oh well. Whatever, dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 These cards are really unique! I like them, some minor OCG pics, and "Golden Crown"'s pic is a bit blurry. on "Machel" : I've never seen a monster with so many counter requirements! How do you keep track of em all? Haha. Anyways effect is unique, some OCG problems. Like the pic. on "Golden Crown" : I actually think this card is a little UP'd, but hey, it's a last resort. Unless you were going to destroy your opponent this turn, I would think that this card has few uses. Pic is a bit blurry and OCG is okay, I think. Good job on these. 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Thanks, sweetlight, huh! Oh, and I usually keep track of counters with Dice, huh! Though sometimes you roll it by accident and you're like "Uh, so how many counters did it have 0.0?" lol Yeah, thanks again. If you could point out the OCG, I'll fix it, huh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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