Jakorlen Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Theses are only the beginning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Best Friends:It's not really a Ritual Card, since it is not the proper offering.Wrong OCG:"Special Summon 1 "Moka-Cute Vampire" or a Level 1 monster from your hand."I cannot rate this, because I can't see the card to go along with this. Dark:Generic nameGeneric imageGeneric descriptionFake TypeNeeds an effect, or else it's useless2/10 Dark Knight of Hate:I don't see how this card relates to the Naruto franchise, and there is not a Naruto or Sasuke Card posted.Knight= Warrior- Type"This card can only be Special Summoned if there is 1 "Naruto" or "Sasuke" on the field. If this card is destroyed by a non DARK monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of this card's original ATK."3.5/10 If you need any more help, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakorlen Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Best Friends:It's not really a Ritual Card' date=' since it is not the proper offering.Wrong OCG:"Special Summon 1 "Moka-Cute Vampire" or a Level 1 monster from your hand."I cannot rate this, because I can't see the card to go along with this. Dark:Generic nameGeneric imageGeneric descriptionFake TypeNeeds an effect, or else it's useless2/10 Dark Knight of Hate:I don't see how this card relates to the Naruto franchise, and there is not a Naruto or Sasuke Card posted.Knight= Warrior- Type"This card can only be Special Summoned if there is 1 "Naruto" or "Sasuke" on the field. If this card is destroyed by a non DARK monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of this card's original ATK."3.5/10 If you need any more help, you can PM me.[/quote']I didnt make these cards. my brother did.his name is jordan.as written on the cards execpt for 'Dark' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 you spelled "thief" wrong. 1/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakorlen Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Heres some new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 These cards are completely random, they don't have supporting cards, and you're bad at basic english, let alone the correct OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakorlen Posted October 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 sorry and thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 I only give 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Bad OCG4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakorlen Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 First of all, whats OCG?AND SECOND, THESE ARE MY CARDS! MAKE YOUR OWN IF YOU'RE GONNA DIS ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:x:x:x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 First of all, OCG means Official Card grammar. Second of all, we are just giving you constructive criticism so you can edit your cards to make them even better. We have not offended you in any way, we are trying to help improve your cards. "Make your own if you're gonna diss me" makes no sense. If you do not want constructive criticism or comments on how to better your cards, you can always not post your cards on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakorlen Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 im new to this thing!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 We understand that, though some members are more strict than others at rating/commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kiba~ Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 The set doesnt quite make sense, 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Jesus has facepalmed. Consider it an honorary level of fail. All that can be said has been said and we're just gonna move right along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nath~ Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 very sad T.T 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 fix OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 I dun mind Fake Types6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakorlen Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 you guys are rude hello, new here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koshej Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 I came to an interesting conclusion recently...Many people start complaining "I'm new here; don't bash me".Just ONE question - what do you mean by HERE???Is it MAKING the cards or _RATHER_ PLAYING the cards, HUH???If someone is well familliar with the GAME - they should have some SENSE of OCG too..!Not _SMALL_ mistakes - could happen to anybody.We're rather talking about "feeling the Effect". :DSo, either most of such complainers are just too young (aka really NOOB :lol: ) - or they just don't care about the results (aka _I_ understand what I mean, if you don't - it's your problem :lol: ). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metroid Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Dark Mario? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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