Enrise Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 [align=center]Another Single for you. Effect:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersOnce per turn, you can add 1 Tuner monster to your hand from your Deck or Graveyard. That Tuner monster is treated as a Union Monster and is equipped to this card with the following effect:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this face-up monster, you can equip it to 1 face-up "Mystical Warrior - Dark" you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.). As long as this card is equipped to "Mystical Warrior - Dark", that card cannot be destroyed. When this card is destroyed, increase the ATK and DEF of "Mystical Warrior - Dark" by its Level x 500.This effect can be used when this card is unequipped with a Tuner. Pic: FW I decided to twist with the effects of Tuners and Unions, just to see what it would be like. Note, the wording may be off, because of the idea. But yeah. Feel free to make suggestions. Don't just rate and go, it's spam. Kthxbai. ~Belail [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 I don't see any OCG errors. The effect is interesting and original. I give it a 9.5/10 because I think the wording is confusing a little and I don't know how to fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Thank you for at least trying to figure out a way to fix the effect. I admit, it is confusing, but if it were real, it could impact the game so greatly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 It's missing the basic piece all Union Monsters should have; " (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)" Atm it's OP because the card it's equipped to can't be destroyed, so I suggest following Union rules =/ Also, it's basically impossible to have a "?" ATK/DEF monster in play. Considering it says "Increase" it should probably start at 0. Also having a 4000 ATK monster afterwards isn't anything to sneeze at. I suggest lowering that too. =/ Just my 2 cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 It's missing the basic piece all Union Monsters should have; " (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle' date=' destroy this card instead.)" Atm it's OP because the card it's equipped to can't be destroyed, so I suggest following Union rules =/ Also, it's basically impossible to have a "?" ATK/DEF monster in play. Considering it says "Increase" it should probably start at 0. Also having a 4000 ATK monster afterwards isn't anything to sneeze at. I suggest lowering that too. =/ Just my 2 cents.[/quote'] Tuners aren't usually 4 stars. They're like, 1,2, and 3 normally. 4 star is rare.But yeah, I'll take those changes into account. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 It's missing the basic piece all Union Monsters should have; " (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle' date=' destroy this card instead.)" Atm it's OP because the card it's equipped to can't be destroyed, so I suggest following Union rules =/ Also, it's basically impossible to have a "?" ATK/DEF monster in play. Considering it says "Increase" it should probably start at 0. Also having a 4000 ATK monster afterwards isn't anything to sneeze at. I suggest lowering that too. =/ Just my 2 cents.[/quote'] Tuners aren't usually 4 stars. They're like, 1,2, and 3 normally. 4 star is rare.But yeah, I'll take those changes into account. OH. xD I thought it was Mystical Warrior - Dark's level. Nevermind then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 It's missing the basic piece all Union Monsters should have; " (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle' date=' destroy this card instead.)" Atm it's OP because the card it's equipped to can't be destroyed, so I suggest following Union rules =/ Also, it's basically impossible to have a "?" ATK/DEF monster in play. Considering it says "Increase" it should probably start at 0. Also having a 4000 ATK monster afterwards isn't anything to sneeze at. I suggest lowering that too. =/ Just my 2 cents.[/quote'] Tuners aren't usually 4 stars. They're like, 1,2, and 3 normally. 4 star is rare.But yeah, I'll take those changes into account. OH. xD I thought it was Mystical Warrior - Dark's level. Nevermind then. OH. xD I thought you were talking about Tuners. Nevermind then. No, seriously, I thought you were. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 confusing wording, though it looks the OCG is just fine the way it is 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 confusing wording' date=' though it looks the OCG is just fine the way it is 9.4/10[/quote'] Yeah, I want to try to find a way to make the wording a little less confusing. But since it's good like this, then, okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byoto Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 I've seen better. But it looks cool.(maybe) 2/10What kind of ATK and DEF is 0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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