Daxter Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Well let me know what you think[spoiler=Card Lore:] This card is also treated as a WATER monster. During each of your Standby Phases that you control this card face-up, inflict 400 points of Direct Damage to your opponents Life Points. Discard 1 Spell card from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by 400 until the end of the turn. ???Don't just say "bad ocg", let me know where I made mistakes so I can improve. If you just say "bad ocg" I'll neg rep ya. Thanks??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 OCG FIX: This card is also treated as a WATER monster. During your Standby Phase, inflict 400 Direct Damage to your opponent. You can discard 1 Spell card from your hand to have this card gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. Looks alright, though the picture could be better... Looks pretty balanced but not that creative... Maybe raise the LV to 8, huh? Good work on your first card though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Not bad for a first card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 OCG, but its a great card.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 Nice work. I know my first card din't turn out half as good, you ought to be really proud of yourself. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 for a first card this is very good nice picture and like the effect 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 It's a really good card. The pic and ocg are pretty good (The ocg has a few errors though). Great job. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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