Huntress-Amy Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 how did i do? this is my spell card 4 it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 its not on EDIT: just seen it, ok for a nOOb , needs better story and plz no vanillas! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 Without an effect or any Support Cards, this card really lacks in originality.Image is slightly pixellated4/10, considering this is your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 yes it is i can c ityes it is i can c iti changed it a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 that better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 Pic is a bit blurry............... The effect shall be like this [ When this card declares battle to a face down monster no Monster or Trap effect can be activate during that Battle Phase. ].................. Its very good for a first card good job............... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 ok ill improve it now iv even made a spell card 4 it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 or mine! (i iz better at OCG)When this card Attacks a Face Down Defence position moster destroy the monster regardless of it's ATT/DEF. No Spell/Trap cards can be activated during the Battle phase that the above effect is activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 done it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 OCG ERRORS! "d" on the end of activate for one!This card cannot be activated unless "Knight Of The Realm" is Face Up on the Field. Equip it with this card to increase it's ATT by 500 for each monster on your opponent's side of the Field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 i will try to sort it out im sorry 4 all the erreor i have madesorted it out now is it done?? or can i improve on any thing eles?any more or is it good now?gr8 its ok now thn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 or mine! (i iz better at OCG)When this card Attacks a Face Down Defence position moster destroy the monster regardless of it's ATT/DEF. No Spell/Trap cards can be activated during the Battle phase that the above effect is activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 or mine! (i iz better at OCG)When this card Attacks a Face Down Defence position moster destroy the monster regardless of it's ATT/DEF. No Spell/Trap cards can be activated during the Battle phase that the above effect is activated. betta? changed it like urs sed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 The support card is pretty good.............. I'll give you for the support 9.5/10..................... Keep on the good work at your cards........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Anytime............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Some ocg errors, pics aren't great neither, though not really bad for a newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 wats the ocg error? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 well first you cant see teh first card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 well first you cant see teh first card! refresh the page and u will itz just not loaded yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 There is a lot of capitalization mistakes, ATT/DEF, and others , just look again you will see ;) Those are minor mistakes but you should change the pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 that was dudettes fault she told me to change it to thatshould it be attack and deffence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Attack/Defense ---> ATK/DEF. You should write ATK and DEF, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 wats the other errors??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ωнιтε ηιgнт яσsε Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 You can check photobucket or deviantart for better pics. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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