Random card I came up with

[Barian Warlord]

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

This image could be loads better.

 

The OCG is off and your effect needs editing. Also its quite boring.

 

Honest rate: 4/10

 

But don't let this discourage you. Use this to make your next card better.

[KurashiDragon]

"Your opponent takes 100 points of damage when he/she draws a card. Once per turn you can negate the effect of a spell, trap, or monster."

 

This card isn't so bad. It's slightly oped and the image could be better but overall its not bad.

 

5.5/10

[Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi]

Overpowered.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG Fix:

"Each time your opponent draws a card, inflict 100 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Once per turn, (Input drawback here. I.E you can discard 1 card to)negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card effect."

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

OCG Fix:

"Each time your opponent draws a card' date=' inflict 100 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Once per turn, [b'](Input drawback here. I.E you can discard 1 card to)[/b]negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card effect."

 

This fix.

Picture really doesnt represent what the name is....its just a tree...

 

for a new member this is a good start and if you persist you'll become a pro in no time.

6/10

[ragnarok1945]

too powerful of an effect, it needs a drawback. You can use the OCG thread to help you on the OCG errors

 

4/10

[Barian Warlord]

I meant for this to be the effect but screwed up in a few places and the pic is a dead trey but oh well.

[Cloister]

since they have already said like all I'll just rate 6/10, and pretty good for a new member