jacob0290 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Well These are some cards I made, and only one was translated, give me all your opinions, and thanks for looking at them and giving your opinion. Kudos Magic and Trap CardNote: I wanted to find a good pic for that, but I did my best Note: Well its a good Title for it Note: Not my best idea for this trap card Field Cards Note: The Theory of 2012 LMAO Note: It looks a little bit Synchro Ritual Cards Note: My Favorite Hero Note: I translated the card from japanese Egyptian God CardNote: When having more then 4000 life points, for every card in your deck, he receives 200 attack points, if less then 4000 life points , every card in your deck is 100 attack points, for every draw you lose attack based on life points increase or decrease. Second effect is for every card in your hand you place in graveyard. You can choose a card in your opponents graveyard and remove it from play Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Norsewemko and her Rit Card already exist. Doesn't matter if you just translated it to English. One could still argue plagiarism. Onuris 1) has a blurry Divine Neos art 2) is unbelieveably unrealistic 3) Must have the effect written ON the card 4) 0X00 is not a really value. Link needs an effect. This isn't the year 2003; all Rituals have effects. The card lore is really terrible. It feels like I'm reading a book rather than a card effect. Observe and Report's discard effect should say something about randomly discarding from the opponent if you insist on the "pick another card" part. "Choose another card" makes them card not only tedious, but OP'd and could cause an infinite loop if your opponent doesn't have a monster in their hand. Study the style of how the card's are written at Yugioh Wikia. Until then...1.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Not good really. First, for endure you just wrote the effect in the longest and most boring way you could. It could just say, "Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack that would reduce your Life Points to 0. Negate the attack and reduce your Life Points to 1."Also, the link card should go in Pop culture.Next, don't use pics of already existing cards ( and for that matter dont make egyptian gods, they're really old.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Put the Link card to pop culture since it's a Zelda game card Endure's effect is boring Also don't make DIVINE attributes and types 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thomas41 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 These are not good. These are crap. [no offense] the god cards are too old to do anything with. So let them be man........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Her TCG name is "Divine Grace - Northwemko". But a good try. I can't flame OP enough for these. They're all just awful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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