Tantis Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 This is pretty much my first card, I will update this thread when I come up with a new card. Once I have a good balance of cards I will then probably make a starter deck for you guys to rate. Enjoy XD. Dark Angel - Adam [spoiler=Card Effect:]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dark Angel Revelation". If your opponent controls no cards except Defense Position Monster Cards, this card can attack your opponent directly. Dark Angel Revelation [spoiler=Card Effect]This card is used to Special Summon, "Dark Angel - Adam", "Dark Angel - Eden" or "Dark Angel - Annoth". You must also Tribute Fairy Monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Monster you are attempting to Special Summon. If this card is destroyed or removed from play, remove from play all monsters with "Dark Angel" in its cards name. Empress Of The Underworld [spoiler=Card Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 "Dark Angel" monsters. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, Special Summon 1"Dark Angel" from your graveyard and remove from play 1 monster from your opponents Graveyard. Dark Angel - Eden [spoiler=Card Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dark Angel Revelation". While this monster is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select another monster with "Dark Angel" in its card name as an attack target. While this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all your monsters with "Dark Angel" in its card name by 200. Dark Angel - Annoth [spoiler=Card Effects]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dark Angel Revelation". If this card is summoned successfully destroy 1 card on the field. While face-up on the field, the controller of this card selects his/her opponents attacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakaway Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Im so so so sorry for this but your OCG SUCKS!!!!!!!! no offence its a good idea and the picture is quite Epic here ill correct them for you and try the OCG pill (In my Signature) amd book mark it and make sure to read it allThis monster can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Fairy-Type monsters from your Graveyard. This card can attack twice in the same Battle Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. PS. if you have any Questions just PM me and i'll try to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tantis Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 No offence taking, It helps. Thanks for the tip and fixing my Card Grammer. I have updated the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Really, not bad for a noob. Since it was updated the OCG seems fine. What really needs work is balancing its effect. Even Arcana Force EX The Dark Ruler has a downside for his heads effect which involves attacking twice. Throwing in penetrate (Damage to def) makes it way to strong.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tantis Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 I know, and its a cool card. After reading it over and over I see its OD. Im in the process of making a spell card for it. Most likely to be continuous, Where I will remove the Text, This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Fairy-Type monsters from your Graveyard, and replace it with; This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Card Name". I will then put in the card an word it to work out, if the card is destroyed Adam goes with or Adam is removed from play. Which means instead of attacking twice, and his current piercing ability, I will allow him to attack life points directly what do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B X Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Great card dude, but, dont you think that the effect is already taken:Plus your cards ATK & DEF are really high specialy with an effect like that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tantis Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 lol, never checked it, the idea came to me and I just put it lol. Still updating it, based off everyones comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 OCG is relatively good, but attacking twice and trample abilities makes it too powerful without any drawbacks to the card 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tantis Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 I updated Dark Angel - Adam, and I just created Dark Angel Revelation to the group, hopefully I evened out the playing field and made Adam less OD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Adam is still not that hard to summon, and its effect remains OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 With Dark Angel Revelation, Adam is OP'ed. Rebalance Dark Angel Revelation. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 I think it's much better now than before. Incorporating a continuous "Ritual" spell was a pretty good idea. Also by copying black tyrano's effect, its Attack is blockable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tantis Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 I tweaked Adam bit, hes now 2100 atk from 2800, and his def is now 100 from 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tantis Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 3 New cards, Empress Of The Under World, Dark Angel - Eden and Dark Angel - Annoth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 just empress of the underworld's effect is a little bit bland, can you give it another one? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tantis Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Working on it dont know what to add and not make her OD. I might change the way she is summoned, by tributing all Dark Angels on the flied, and I change Revelation, instead of removing Dark Angels from play, just sending them to the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 With Dark Angel Revelation' date=' Adam is OP'ed. Rebalance Dark Angel Revelation. 6/10[/quote'] I agree with this post, anyway 6.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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