Huntress-Amy Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 [i kno the pic is bad i carnt fnd a beta 1]plz comment saying how i can improve or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotsasuma Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 You have some mistakes like you need to Cap Graveyard, Special Summon, and Realm.Also put a space between your side.Pretty much it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 -Image is bad, but you already knew-OCG errors. Fixed version:"Once per turn, by Tributing 1 monster you control, you can Special Summon 1 "Knight of the realm" from your hand or Deck."Seriously, what card effect has a "u" instead of "you"? Cannot rate it, because Knight of the Realm is not posted, so I don't know whether this card is powerful or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 oops soz thats my writing i did that in skool today too lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 [align=center]Not grat OCG. I'd check out the OCG thread in Realistic Cards. Pic is kind of blurry. Google search could probably find a good pic with the keywords 'paranormal realm'.2/10.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 The pic isn't so good.................. And make the OCG like Starly_64 said................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 i am trying my internet is so slow i can count to 1000 b4 it loadsi got a prob i carnt find a decent pic n my comp wont alow me to go in the card section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 thanks 4 the rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 1 OCG error detected:when you mention numbers, say something like 1, don't spell the numbers out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntress-Amy Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 okk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 I could give you a better picture...You want it? Say please first... LOL Just a while... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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