Master White Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 See what you think of them, thanks. [spoiler=White Thunder Monsters (Updated)]White Thunder-Black Lightning:White Thunder-Blue Lightning:White Thunder-Green LightningWhite Thunder-Orange Lightning:White Thunder-OrangeYellow Lightning:White Thunder-Pink Lightning:White Thunder-Purple Lightning:White Thunder-Red LightningWhite Thunder-White LightningWhite Thunder-Yellow Lightning [spoiler=New "White Thunder" Monsters]White Thunder-Rainbow Lightning:White Thunder-Gold Lightning:White Thunder-Brown Lightning: I made the two vanillas because it is a new set, so every set has to have some vanillas. If any of you out there could help me find two other colors, like silver colored lightning or lightning strike and cyan colored lightning or lightning strike, I would appreciate it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zombiepromking Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Not bad. OCG is pretty off. Blue Lightning is seriously OP'ed, just lower its ATK and it should be fine. It goes the same with all the low-level beaters, excluding Orange and yellow. Now, i shouldn't even have to say anything about Mr. LV w/ 4000 DEF. The 3000 ATK boss monster needs a better effect. These are pretty much BW's with a bit of a different use. I'd say Beatdown/Control. Overall - 6/10 Fix the OCG, make more cards, and re-balance for a potential rare 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Thanks, I'll remake them and make more tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 OCG is bad. Your cards are OP. Nice idea though. It works weirdly. 6.4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 the first half of the cards have way too boring effects for Red Lightning, why are you giving a lv4 monster 4000 def? And the second half of the cards have OPed effects anyway 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Well, Red Lightning I was trying to do a bigger defense card with a small drawback, like destiny hero-Defender. His defense is 2700 and makes it so your opponent draws cards. Secon, Even if he's a five star monster, he still has 3000 defense. So that is why I made it so your opponent draws three cards. If you still think it's way OP'd, I'll make it a six star, for one tribute. The rest of the half I'll remake, keep the names and pics tho, It's kinda hard to find colored lightning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toa141825 Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 your cards are either OP'ed or have bad OCG, and some of the pics have words on bottom.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 --bump-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 i agree with ragnarok on this one.also, write the lores underneath. i can read them as it is, but rather than wait for the pic i can get the effect (my interest = slowsville ATM, damned cap)7/10an interesting concept though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 i agree with ragnarok on this one.also' date=' write the lores underneath. i can read them as it is, but rather than wait for the pic i can get the effect (my interest = slowsville ATM, damned cap)7/10an interesting concept though[/quote'] I updated them after he gave that rating, just letting you know. thanks tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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