mixx Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 I just started making cutom cards today and This is only my second set of custom cards i have made so far so they might not be that good, please tell me how I can improve. Elemental Bird - EarthEffect:When this card on the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, its effect is activated. After activation, during this turn any Battle Damage that the controller of this card takes becomes 0. Elemental Bird - AirEffect:Once per turn, by tributing 1 monster, inflict 500 damage to your oppenent. This monster cannot declare an attack if you used this effect this turn. Elemental Bird - WaterEffect:Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can return 1 "Elemental Bird" monster from your graveyard to its owner's hand. Elemental Bird - FireEffect:Once per turn, you can inflict 300 x, the number of monsters on the field with the name "Elemental Bird", damage to your opponent. This monster cannot declare an attack if you used this effect this turn. Strength Of The Elemental Birds - SpellEffect:While all four "Elemental Birds" are in play, each "Elemental Birds" ATK and DEF are increased by the difference of your Life Points and your opponents Life Points. This effect wares off at the end of the turn. Windy Day - Spell During the controller of this card's Attack Phase, all WIND monsters can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Share Posted October 18, 2009 way too bland of effects for all of them, along with OCG errors (use OCG thread to help you) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 whats the link to the ocg link or where is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 I really like the pics. They don't have that "look" to them, but the fit together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swimmer117 Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 the four elements are air, water, fire, and earth. is there a particular reason why you used ice instead of air? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 ohhh sorry, i thought it was ice :( ill change itOk its all changed now and i added the other spell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 19, 2009 Report Share Posted October 19, 2009 Nice cards, you need to fix the OCG errors however. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixx Posted October 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 whats wrong with the ogc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Wouldn't u wanna make the birds the element that they are from and make them winged-beasts? NOt that I care, if you are gonna say that makes windy day useless, change the text to winged-beast, oh and "this effect wares off" is unecessary text. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCleaner Posted October 22, 2009 Report Share Posted October 22, 2009 Hmmm...I know they're birds and all, but why does Elemental Bird - Fire have a Wind Element? The same goes for Water and Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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