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DemonShark172

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  1. 1. What's wrong?

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i see what your trying to do

 

here is what you should have done.

with your effect.

 

As long as this field spell stays face up on the field.

Your opponents monsters lose 500 Atk and 200.

during the end phase of your opponents turn

they must tribute one monster on the field.

if they can not they take 500 points of damage.

 

my ocg my not be perfect either but this is a much beter effect for your field spell.

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The picture is great. The effect is quite bland.

Am I wrong if I say it's quite overpowered?

I mean e.g. Mountain gives 200 ATK and DEF (total 400) to two specific types, while this card gives -500 ATK and -200 DEF (total 700) for all your opponent and lowers the opponents Life Points by 500 each turn.

 

For the OCG isn't it along the lines;

"As long as this card remains face-up on the field, lower the ATK by 500 and DEF by 200 for all face-up monsters on the opponents side of the field."

Though I have no idea how to phrase the second part...

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