psychicplayer Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 This card cannot be attacked. When a LIGHT monster you control battles, you can discard this card to destroy the monster battling the monster you control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 OCG: This card cannot be attacked. When a monster you control battles, you can discard this card to destroy the monster battling the monster you control. Use this^ OCG, it's a bit clearer, I think. For the card itself, I think it is a useful effect, the picture is nice, but then again the effect reminds me a bit too much of Honest in a way... Oh wait, the name has "Honest" in it =p Never mind then! 8/10 P.S. You shouldn't rate your own poll =S and I don't really think this would be really splashable since the effect isn't specifically towards LIGHT monsters. If it was meant to be like Honest, maybe you should make it only when a LIGHT monster battles... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted October 20, 2009 Report Share Posted October 20, 2009 It's alright of a card and maybe you should have the second effect discard 1 more card from your hand so it wouldn't be as easy of an effect to use. Also, I notice some OCG errors but great card overall. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 It's alright of a card and maybe you should have the second effect discard 1 more card from your hand so it wouldn't be as easy of an effect to use. Also' date=' I notice some OCG errors but great card overall. 8.5/10[/quote'] the real Honest has the exact same effect except it inflicts damage equal to the ATK of your monster or your opponent's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 It's alright of a card and maybe you should have the second effect discard 1 more card from your hand so it wouldn't be as easy of an effect to use. Also' date=' I notice some OCG errors but great card overall. 8.5/10[/quote'] the real Honest has the exact same effect except it inflicts damage equal to the ATK of your monster or your opponent's. "During your Main Phase, you can return this card from the field to its owner's hand. During either player's Damage Step, when a face-up LIGHT monster you control battles, you can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard to have that monster gain ATK equal to the ATK of the opponent's monster it is battling, until the End Phase." This is Honest's effect. It has nothing to do with damage? Anyway, looking at this, your card is pretty much the same thing, except more broken because it's not just for LIGHT monsters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 I'll fix it soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wirespy Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 Good card but you need to put kinda a bigger cost on it, and fix this first part:"This card cannot be attacked." into "This card cannot be targeted as an attack target." 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 the attack effect has been on other cards too in the way i stated it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 The Win is too epic!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 its ok, it is a little bit like an honest jr. maybe make it negate the attack rather than destroy the monster.then its like a Sakuretsu Armor from your hand. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Share Posted October 21, 2009 impressive picture, OCG looks a little weird, but I think it's right 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted October 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 Thnx for the ratings guys. This is for the one who thought it needed a cost. Honest is just like this on Steroids with no cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 All I can say is that if you are supposed to discard this card from your hand, then its first effect is pointless. why would you summon it to the field? Cannot be attacked means that your opponent attacks you directly if this is the only monster you control. Anyway, another Honest card is a good idea. It's true that this card is weaker than Honest because it does not damage your opponent, but the reason why this card is too powerful is that your deck could contain 6 Honests, or at the very least, 3 Sakuretsu Armors from your hand If you are not using a LIGHT deck. I personally would do something closer to this... While you control another monster, this card cannot be attacked. This card cannot be used as a tribute for a tribute summon. If a monster on your side of the field is attacked, you can special summon this card from your hand. If this card is face-up on the field when a monster on your side of the field battles, you can tribute this card to destroy the opposing monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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