My 500th post (one of my specialties)

[Neo-MasterX]

Comment if i have changed my skills from my first cards

Lore:

Every Main Phase you can call up to 2 level 4 or lower DARK Attribute monsters from your hand to your side of the field. If there are another DARK Attribute monsters on your side of the field this card cannot be selected as an attack target. In the 5th Main Phase this monster was Special Summoned, sent this monster to the graveyard to Special Summon 1 LV7 or lower Warrior-Type, DARK Attribute monster from your Deck to your side of the field (ignoring the summoning conditions).

[Bengal]

OCG fix:

 

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower DARK monsters from your hand. While you control 1 or more face-up DARK monsters (excluding this card), this card cannot be selected as an attack target. During the 5th Main Phase after this card was Summoned, send it to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower DARK monster from your Deck (ignoring Summoning conditions).

 

Not bad, the image is pretty good, but the name isn't the most creative.

 

It also seems overpowered, considering there is no cost to SS 2 monsters each turn. My suggestion is to lower that to 1, and add a cost, maybe a discard cost to coincide with the second effect.

 

7/10

[Alcander]

I've never seen that pic, it's kinda cool, OCG errors, common name. 7.5/10

[ragnarok1945]

without any cost to special summon the 2 DARK monsters from your hand to the field, it's too Oped

 

6.8/10

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

the first effect is unbalanced, its too strong.

ocg has been corrected.

effect is ok apart from that.

7/10