ShootingTheMoon Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 [align=center]This is my backup set for the Physics set which I quit doing.Lore:This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage Calculation is applied nomrally.) If this card is flipped face-up by a card effect, destroy it. If this card is in face-up Attack Position switch it to Defense Position. This card can attack during your Battle Phase if this card is in DEF position. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can select and activate 1 of the effects:● Remove from play 1 monster on the field. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack during this turn.● If this card destroyed your opponent's monster as a result of battle, it can attack once again in a row. Lore:You can tribute 3 Monsters to Special Summon this card to your field in ATK position. If you activated that effect you can choose 1 WATER and 1 WIND monster on your field and tribute them to summon 3 "Oxygen Tokens" (Fairy-Type/Light/Level 1/ATK 400/DEF 900) this card cannot be destroy by battle.Credit to Wanderley on the background.Please point out any OCG Errors ^^Please be positive, Thanks to Άř¢ħėłäűŝ for first OCG Fix.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 It's been a while since I corrected OCG in this Forum. :D FIX: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage Calculation is applied nomrally.) If this card is flipped face-up by a card effect, destroy it. If this card is in face-up Attack Position switch it to Defense Position. This card can attack during your Battle Phase if this card is in DEF position. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can select and activate 1 of the effects:● Remove from play 1 monster on the field. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack during this turn.● If this card destroyed your opponent's monster as a result of battle, it can attack once again in a row. Reminded me of BLS Envoy of the Beginning's effect. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Thanks I'm putting the real OCG in (yours) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 [spoiler=Image Cnc since I cannot seem to find it in Showcase.]Maybe try to make your lines thinner. Bolder lines take away from the image, and make it look cartoon-ish, in a bad way. Also, bg has nothing to do with the img. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage Calculation is applied nomrally.)This face-up Attack Position monster cannot declare an attack. If this card is flipped face-up by a card effect, destroy it. If this card is in face-up Attack Position it is switched to Defense Position. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, this face-up Defense Position monster can declare an attack. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:● Remove from play 1 monster on the field. If you activate this effect, this card cannot declare an attack during this turn.● If this card destroyed your opponent's monster as a result of battle, it can attack once again in a row. Anyways, you are getting better at making images. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 a slightly more flexible version of Black Luster Soldier Envoy of the Beginning pic is hardly impressive though 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I addzed a Hydrogen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 You should make it so that you can tribute Oxygen tokens for a power increase, somehow. That might be an idea. :) If you pm me a render of 1 of your cards, I will gladly make a banner for your set for free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Gold's effect contradicts itself. Its effects only activate when you destroy a monster in battle, but...effect 1 says you can't attack this turn, even tho you already did in order to activate this effect.effect 2 redundantly repeats the "if you destroy by battle" condition.If it was supposed to be the same as BLS, it would be "Once per turn, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects" Hydro is kinda weird too. Why would you tribute 5 monsters (assuming you can even accomplish that) just to summon a 0/0 and three 400/900's? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I already made a banner, srry. I save mine as JPG's so I can't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 you should lower the level. it doesn't have atk boosting ability and its effect isn't that powerful, so it shouldn't be lv8 with 0 atk/def 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 funking adorable. Must... cuddle... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Hey! My idea!10/10Why are you makin' so few? I'm makin' the Whole Table and the Combined Elements, including Water and Iron Pyrite, and Hydrogen Cyanide...Please make those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 OH NOES!!! its chemistry back to haunt me... >_<these are good. first card is practically a BLS...(effect wise anyways, making it unoriginal)Second card fix: Lore:You can Tribute 3 monsters you control to Special Summon this card in Attack Position. When this card is Special Summoned, you can select 1 WATER and 1 WIND monster you control and Tribute them to summon 3 "Oxygen Tokens" (Fairy-Type/Light/Level 1/ATK 400/DEF 900). This card cannot be destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied normally). Also, first card still has an error. "Normally" is spelt wrong.7.5/10 (for these two)but im waiting for some more.make a Plutonium and Uranium next... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 No, I'm adding Silver and Oxygen next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I already made a banner' date=' srry. I save mine as JPG's so I can't.[/quote'] *facepalm* First of all, I have GIMP, so I can get passed JPEG difficulties. Second of all, the banner you made isn't that proffesional-looking, no offense, so I thought that I would offer to make you one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted November 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Will stop doing this set soon, Jolta you can take it from here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 8/10Selfdraw Pics???On Paint???Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 like the long ( ish ) effect`s and pictures are ok 8/10 cant wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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