Tortoise Kyle Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 [align=center]This is where cards for the new archetype I am making will go. Please rate and critisize. [spoiler=Monsters][spoiler=Supreme Tortuga]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing all WATER or all EARTH monsters in your Graveyard from play. This cards original ATK and DEF are equal to the number of monsters removed from play because of this effect x500. If you control at least 1 EARTH monster beside this card, you can discard 2 cards to destroy 1 Monster Card. If you control at least 1 WATER monster, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card. Pay 500 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases or destroy this card. [spoiler=Flying Tortuga]This card is also treated as a Reptile-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, you can pay Life Points in multiples of 300 (max. 1200). For each 300 Life points payed, flip a coin. For each heads, destroy 1 card your opponent controls. [spoiler=Tortuga Wizard]This card is also treated as a Reptile-Type monster. Increase the ATK of all monsters you control by 200 for each "Tortuga" monster you control. When this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, this card's ATK is changed to 2000 during the Damage Step. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 interesting, so you can't remove a few WATER and a few EARTH monsters to determine its atk, has to be all one or the other, not a mix unfortunately it needs another effect while on the field than just atk boosting 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 hmm..I agree with ragnarok..you should put something like increase its ATK and DEF for each WATER monster by 700 and decrease for each EARTH monster by 200..or something like that...the pic is nice...+you made a reptile card...:D rate: 9,0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 The Pic reminds me of my Spatial Beasts. Needs another effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Edited card and added new card.Why do I have 48 views and only 3 replies? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GunMetalDevil Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 not half bad. 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
→мαthєus. Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Supreme Tortuga seems to be OP'ed ! Flying tortuga is fine OCG need's work 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
assanaut Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Pretty good, but Supreme Tortuga's ATK is a bit overpowered, especially since a normal person's Graveyard fills up pretty quickly; 6 monsters and he's pumped up to 3600 ATK! Try something like a 500 or 400 ATK bonus. Plus, WTF is up with Flying Tortuga's Picture? 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 BUMP (this is getting annoying) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROY Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Turtle King Wrote: "If you control at least 1 EARTH monster beside this card, you can discard 2 cards to destroy 1" You should probably add the word "card" to the end of this sentence, but other than that I think their pretty well balanced. Rating 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Yea, that is just me being an idiot there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Another BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Good pics, OCG is ok.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Thanks for the rate + bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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