TheCleaner Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I had the sudden urge to make a space deck xD.Anways, hope you enjoy.Please Rate and Tell me where i could improveThank You! Monsters: Lore: A Standard-Class Federation Interceptor Fleet. When an opponent summons a monster you may sacrifice this card to destroy the summoned monster Lore:A Cricskis-Class Federation Battleship. If Commander Eskill is on your side of the field this card gains 800 ATK points Lore:"Cricskis Battleship" + "Commander Eskill"The Radiant Star, Flagship of Fleet 66 and Pride of the Federation Army.When This card is succesfuly Fusion Summoned all Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field (exculding "Radiant Star") cannot be the target of an attackAfter This Card is Destroyed, you can Special Summon it back on the field with Half its ATK and DEF, this effect can only be used once Lore:A Scorpion-Class Federation Heavy Fighter. When this card is summoned face-up on the field you may destroy any face-up card that has 4 stars or less Lore:A Light Federation Attack Drone, these machines are quick and versatile but dont have much firepower.This Card cannot be Normal summoned, This card can only be Special Summoned by the spell card "Drop Off" Lore:A Dynaheir-Class Federation Frigate Lore:A Standard-Class Federation Carrier. When This card is summoned, you may special-summon 2 Interceptor Fleets in attack mode to your side of the field. Lore:A standard-class Federation Fighter Lore:Commander Eskill, Royal Commander of Fleet 66. As Long as Commander Eskill is on your side of the field, all Machine-Type monsters that are on your side of the field gain 400 ATK and 200 DEF Spells: Lore:Galaxy 2061, Coded 426 Light Years From Earth, it is the only Galaxy besides the Milky Way that has a planet that can support life. As Long as this card remains of the field all Light Machine-Type monsters gain 300 (450 if informatics is in play) ATK and 200 (300 if informatics is in play) DEF Lore:Boosts the Power of Several Magic and Trap cards Lore:As long as this card is in play, all Machine-Type monsters will gain 150 (250 if informatics is in play) ATK and DEF Lore:When this card is activated, deal 500 (800 if informatics is in play) points of damage to your opponents LP Lore:Planet Raid can only be activated when you have at least 1 "Federation Carrier" on your side of the field. For every turn this card is in play your opponent takes 150 (250 if informatics is in play) points of damage. This card is automatically destroyed when there are no "Federation Carrier's" on your side of the field Lore:Ongoing Support from a Space station gives the equipped ship an extra 1000 ATK and 500 DEF, can only be equiped to a 5 (7 if informatics is currently in play) star or lower Machine-Type Monster Lore:Select 1 Card from your deck and remove it from play, add it to your hand after 5 (3 if informatics is in play) turns Lore:Federation Carriers are always armed with Drop Pods, a key element to quickly dropping off infantry and machines. Summon 2 (3 if informatics is in play) "Titan Walkers" from your Hand or Deck in ATK or DEF mode Lore:Ressurects 1 Machine-Type Monster but permantly decreases the ATK and DEF of the ressurected monster by 800 (600 if informatics is in play) Lore:When this card is activated you may Special-Summon 2 Machine-Type monsters that have 4 (5 if informatics is in play) stars or less to your side of the field in ATK or DEF mode Trap Cards: Lore: When this card is activated choose 1 of 3 effects:1: Discard your hand then draw 7 cards, then select 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand, Special-Summon it to your side of the field and redirect your opponents attack to the summoned monster.2: Select a card from your opponents deck and add it to your hand, if it is a monster card you may sacrifice it and deal 1/3 of its ATK points as damage to your opponents life points3: (This Option can only be chosen if informatics is in play) Your opponent draws until they have 7 cards then reveals thier hand, choose 3 cards to remove from play, choose 2 cards to send to the graveyard then choose 1 card to add to your hand Lore:When this card is activated roll a die.If it lands on 2 or 6, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field.If it lands on 1 or 3, negate the effects of every card in play except "Ion Explosion" for 1 turn.If it lands on 4 or 5, each player must chose 5 Spell or Trap cards from thier hand or deck and remove them from play Lore:When an opponent launches an attack on any of your Machine-Type monsters you can redirect the attack to any other monster on your side of the field Or(This can only be used if informatics is in play) redirect the attack to any other monster on the field, if the attacking monster is destroyed deal 1/4 worth of its ATK as damage to your opponents LP Lore:When this card is activated you may negate and destroy up to 3 (5 if informatics is currently in play) cards. For each card you negate and destroy you must pay 800 (600 if informatics is currently in play) LP. After this card is used, you may not attack for 2 (1 if informatics is in play) turns Lore:When one of your Machine-Type monsters is destroyed send 1 Machine-Type monster from your side of the field back to your hand. All attacks are negated for 1 turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Bad OCG. Fuzzy images. 6.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCleaner Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Bad OCG. Fuzzy images. 6.7/10. Yea, i dont know why Deviant Art does that, but it's the only site that has the required images.As for the OCG, i'll work on that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Also, you shouldn't use "flavor text" on effect/spell/trap cards. Only yellow cards have meaningless text on them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCleaner Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Just wanted to add those for some fun ^_^, dont see how they could hurt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 if possible. can you place Spoilers around the cards. as it makes it a pain to read.OCG is odd...?its like there's a description (like a vanilla) and then an effect?that doesnt make sense.please correct.plus, pictures are blurry.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCleaner Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 How Do I Make Spoilers? Lol, Deviant Art is annoying ><, i guess i'll remove the vallinas.I'll Correct the OCG's Too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePhilosophylover Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Not bad........not to good......but not bad. 6/10Don't write descriptions on spells, traps, and effect monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eragon Shadeslayer Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 if you have a description and an effect it shouldnt even be in realistic cards because no cards in the WORLD have a description and an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCleaner Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Vallina's Removed, Fixing Images Soon and can someone tell me how to make that spoiler thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 most pics are blurry, and there's many OCG errors 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 i messaged you about how to make a spoiler list, get to work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GunMetalDevil Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 needs some work. 5/10, try not copying the deviant art pics wen theyre small images and do it wen theyre big so they wnt b blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Pictures are fuzzy. When you get an image, crop it to 244X248 to make a perfect pic. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCleaner Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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