The0 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 I am not English, do not be too hard on the ogc svp =)Comment and rate plz [spoiler= Raziel the Blade Master]Effect : 1 Tuner monster + 1non-tuner monster or moreThis card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :-This card can attack twice during the same battle phase , at the end of your turn , you may discard 1 card from your hand to your graveyard to special summon 1 normal monster since your deck-If this card is destroyed , you can special summon 1 normal monster from your graveyard to your field [spoiler= Gemini Strengh]Effect : This card cannot be equipped that has a warrior gemini monster of level 5 or less, the equipped monster does not need to be called has new to be able to use its effect. increase the ATK of the equipped monster of 1000 points and lowered his DEF of 500 points. When this card is removed from the ground, you lose 1000 LP [spoiler= Zombie Warrior]Effect : This card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :If this card is in your graveyard when a gemini monster is destroyed , you can special summon this card in defence position , if you do this switch the ATK and the DEF of this card [spoiler= No Issue]Effect : You can activate this card when a gemini monster is the target of an attack, negate the attack and you can call upon a normal monster lvl 4 or less since your deck on your field [spoiler= Ezekiel The Spearmen]Effect: This card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :-This card has to be to attack twice to be destroyed, if this card is used to make a synchro summon you and your opponent can draw up 1 card. [spoiler= Zarkol The Strategist]Effect : This card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :-If this card attacks, you can increase his ATK of 700, if this card is attacked you have to lower its ATK and its DEF of 200. If this card is destroyed by an effect of card you can call specially upon a normal monster lvl 5 or less since your deck on your side of the field [spoiler= Bako The Exiled]Effect : If you have already 1warrior monster on your field , you can special summon this card , if you do this , you must to discard 1 card from your hand to your graveyard [spoiler= Arick , The Guard Of EtherSword]Effect : This card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :-When this card is special summon , you can destroy2 spell/trap on the field . If this card is destroyed in battle , you can special summon 1 " Arick , Guard of the dark city entrance" from your deck to the field [spoiler= Jioky , The Dark Warrior]Effect : "Ezekiel , The Spearmen"+ 1 non-tuner monster or moreThis card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :-This card cannot be destroyed in combat , if this card is destroyed by an opponent card effect , you can special summon 2 normal monster lvl 6 or lower from your deck to the field, if this card is destroyed by an effect of your cards , you can special summon 2 normal monster from your graveyard to the field. [spoiler= Melasterre , The Archmage Lord]Effect : 1tuner monster + 1non-tuner monster or moreThis card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :When a gemini monster is destroyed in combat , you can special summon 2 token "Micro Archmage" (lvl 4,DARK; ATK = 0 DEF = 2000)in defence position on the field , if this card is destroyed , you can tribute 2 token "Micro Archmage" on the field for special summon this card . [spoiler= Gemini ArchMage]Effect : Once per turn , you may to return 2 cards from your hand to your deck and draw 1 card , if you do this increase the ATK of eatch gemini monster on your field of 200 [spoiler= City Of EtherSword]Effect : when this card is face-up on the field , your gemini warrior monster gain 300 ATK and DEF for each gemini monster in both graveyard [spoiler= Galek The Crazy Warrior]Effect : This card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :- If you tribute 1 dark and 1 earth monster to summon this card , you can destroy 2 cards on the field of your opponent , if you do this , reduce the ATK of this card of 300 , If this card is destroyed in combat , you can discard 1 gemini monster lv 6 or more for draw 2 cards [spoiler= Dark Elf Archer]Effect : This card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :-If this card is a target of an attack , you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack or change the cible of the attack [spoiler= Synchro Emprisonner]Effect : You can activate this card when a synchro monster is shyncro summoned , deascrase the attack of this monster of 1500 and discard 2 card from your hand . [spoiler= Winged Elf Archer]Effect : This card is treated as a normal monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard .While this card is face up on the field , you can normal summon it to have it be treated as an effect monster with this effect :-This card can attack twice during the same battle phase , when a gemini monster is a target of an attack , you can pay 600 LP to negate the attack [spoiler= The Rogue Monarch , Arouno]When this card is normal summoned succefuly , your opponent must to discard 2 cards from this hand , if you do this , this card can't attack this turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 up ! please comment ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Raziel's effect is too bland. It's balanced, but synchros are supposed to be OPed, so give it another one 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Ok i give it one more effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 up !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 that looks better now, I'll raise the rate to 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 10/10Too awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 OCG Fixes: Raizel - The Blade Master Effect:1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:- This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. During your End Phase, you may discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Normal Monster from your deck. Gemini Strength (change it to an Equip Spell Card) Effect :This card cannot be equipped to a Warrior-Type Gemini Monster of Level 5 or less. The equipped monster gains its effect without Normal Summoning it. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 1000 points and decrease its DEF by 500 points. When this card is removed from the field, inflict 1000 points of direct damage to the controller of this card. Zombie Warrior (just fixing the spaces and capitalizing words) Effect:This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:- If this card is in your Graveyard when a Gemini Monster is destroyed, you can Special Summon this card in Defense position. If you do, switch the ATK and the DEF of this card No Issue Effect:You can activate this card when a Gemini Monster is selected as an attack target. Negate the attack and you can Special Summon a Level 4 or less Normal Monster from your deck to the field. Not bad cards. 9/10. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Thx =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Finally updated?10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 not too bad. ocg has been corrected. effects are ok. first card's is a tad bland though. maybe add another. just a small one.pictures are good, others cards are good as well.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 1 more effect for raziel ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Up !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Very good cards9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Bump !! new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 for Melastarre, please put some restrictions on the tokens and you'll be good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Up!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 good cards9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imma Mario Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 It should be "Tom, The Awesome" not "Tom , The Awesome" in the name. < EXAMPLE 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 new card !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Crazy Warrior should have more than 1 effect for it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Actually decent cards. Pics are good, OCG isn't terrible, meh, 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Ok ! Up any more comment ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 It's better now, I'll raise the rate to 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 bump new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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