Extraterrestrial Serpent

[Favela]

New card. Opinions about it, and fixes :). Image Credit: ~WraithPhantom73 - deviantART.

 

Extraterrestrial Serpent

Extraterrestrial Serpent

 

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[spoiler=Effect]This card can also be treated as a Dragon-Type monster. If this card is Special Summoned by 2 Dragon-Type monsters, select 1 Level 4 or lower Normal Monster on the field to gain the effect of a monster in your hand or Graveyard (excluding this card). Each time the monster that gained the effect destroys a Level 4 or higher monster, this card gains 500 ATK.

[spoiler=Effect]This card can also be treated as a Dragon-Type monster. If this card is Special Summoned by 2 Dragon-Type monsters, select 1 Level 4 or lower Normal Monster on the field to gain the effect of a monster in your hand or Graveyard (excluding this card). Each time the monster that gained the effect destroys a Level 4 or higher monster, this card gains 500 ATK.

 

[ragnarok1945]

first sentence you can just say This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster.

 

8/10

[Jolta]

OCG, but doesn't affect my rating.

10/10

You COULD associate it with Aliens...

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

ocg errors, pic is overused.

 

FIX:

 

This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. If this card is Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Dragon-Type monsters, select 1 Level 4 or lower Normal Monster on the field and reveal 1 Effect Monster in your hand (except this card). The selected card gains the effect of the monster you revealed and is treated as an Effect Monster. Each time the monster that gained the effect destroys a Level 4 or higher monster, this card gains 500 ATK.

 

reminds me of alien monsters as well.

8/10