Master Red Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 This card is slightly OP'd (IMO), intending for this card to be used in an RP someday.. hopefully :P EDIT: Added a Support Card (might also be slightly OP'd) [align=center]The controller of this card pays 300 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases (this is not optional). This card cannot be destroyed by an effect that targets. While this card is face-up on the field, all monsters you control are treated as DARK Fiend-Type monsters. During each of your End Phases, destroy 1 monster you control and Special Summon 1 "Dark Heart Token" (Fiend-Type/ DARK/ Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF 0) in Defense Position. When a "Dark Heart Token" is destroyed, put 1 Corruption Counter on a face-up monster your opponent controls. During each of your Standby Phases, you can take control of 1 monster with a Corruption Counter your opponent controls and your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. It is removed from play during your next Standby Phase. The controller of this card pays 300 Life Points during each of their Standby Phases (this is not optional). This card cannot be destroyed by an effect that targets. While this card remains face-up on the field, all monsters you control are treated like DARK, Fiend-Type monsters. During the End Phase of your turn, destroy 1 monster you control and Special Summon 1 "Dark Brain Token" (Fiend-Type/ DARK/ Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF 0) in Defense Position (this is not optional). Whenever a "Dark Brain Token" is destroyed, place 1 Corruption Counter on a monster your opponent controls. During your Standby Phase, you can remove 1 Corruption Counter from a monster on the field in order to pick up 2 cards from your Deck and Special Summon any Monster Cards among them, ingnoring the Summoning Conditions. Shuffle the rest into your Deck. Then, increase your opponent's Life Points by 1000. When this card is removed from the field, remove from play all monsters Special Summoned by this effect. The controller of this card pays 300 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases (this is not optional). This card cannot be destroyed by an effect that targets. While this card is face-up on the field, all monsters you control are treated as DARK Fiend-Type monsters. During each of your End Phases, destroy 1 monster you control and Special Summon 1 "Dark Soul Token" (Fiend-Type/ DARK/ Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF 0) in Defense Position. When a "Dark Soul Token" is destroyed, put 1 Corruption Counter on a face-up monster your opponent controls. During each of your Standby Phases, you can remove from play 1 monster with a Corruption Counter your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 "Corruption Token" (DARK/ Fiend-Type/ Level 4/ ATK 1600/ DEF 1000) and your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. When a "Corruption Token" inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, remove from play 1 random card in your opponent's hand. You can discard this card from your hand in order to search your Deck for a Continous Spell Card and put it into your hand. When a Continous Spell Card you control would be destroyed by an opponing card effect, remove this card in your Graveyard from play in order to negate the effect of that card an destroy it (this is not optional).[/align] Please comment and rate/hate :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Looks fine.Is the image PG?10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Looks fine.Is the image PG?10/10Thank you :)It's art.. I don't see PG when it comes to art :Pbut it should be fine anyways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 I see it's slightly Op.Anyways a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Thank you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Looks fine.Is the image PG?10/10Thank you :)It's art.. I don't see PG when it comes to art :Pbut it should be fine anyways Oh, for some reason, i thought she was naked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Maybe she is, maybe she isn't, I don't give a damn personally :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Good support, it's somewhat bland though.A 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Well, she's a support card, it's hard to make her not bland :PI know the discard to pick up certain cards is uncreative, but I wanted her to be that kind of support. And like your rating tells me, uncreative doesn't make it aweful :PUpdated with Corrupted Mind and Corrupted Soul :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Corrupted Soul's pic isn't as good as the others, but the effects of all 3 are awesome 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 I give 9/10 nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 All 3 cards are great!Good job, dude! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Thanks guys :) I know souls pic is not är good as the others, but i still kinda like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 awesome 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Thank you :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 These are great, I can totaly see some mayor villian use them.A 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Woohoo!Smexy!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Thanks all ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 bump ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 FIX: The controller of this card pays 300 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases. This card cannot be destroyed by an effect that targets it. While this card is face-up on the field, all monsters you control are treated as DARK Fiend-Type monsters. During each of your End Phases, destroy 1 monster you control and Special Summon 1 "Dark Heart Token" (Fiend-Type/ DARK/ Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF 0) in Defense Position . When a "Dark Heart Token" is destroyed, put 1 Corruption Counter on a face-up monster your opponent controls. During each of your Standby Phases, you can take control of 1 monster with a Corruption Counter your opponent controls and your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. It is removed from play during your next Standby Phase. I only fixed the first one, there were too many for me to fix.I nerfed the effects down a bit in the fix. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Red Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 FIX: The controller of this card pays 300 Life Points during each of his/her Standby Phases. This card cannot be destroyed by an effect that targets it. While this card is face-up on the field' date=' all monsters you control are treated as DARK Fiend-Type monsters. During each of your End Phases, destroy 1 monster you control and Special Summon 1 "Dark Heart Token" (Fiend-Type/ DARK/ Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF 0) in Defense Position . When a "Dark Heart Token" is destroyed, put 1 Corruption Counter on a face-up monster your opponent controls. During each of your Standby Phases, you can take control of 1 monster with a Corruption Counter your opponent controls and your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. It is removed from play during your next Standby Phase. I only fixed the first one, there were too many for me to fix.I nerfed the effects down a bit in the fix. 9/10[/quote']Thank you.. I will update with the fic shortly although I don't think you need to put in the 'it' on the target thing, and the '(this is not optional)' on the LP cost should stay (many real cards has this) as it is required (otherwise you can skip the cost in order to have it destroyed).. but otherwise the fix looks correct ^^ :P EDIT: I tried to edit corrupted soul according to your fix.. don't know if I got it right though <.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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