Dmaker Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 I enterd this card into a team 1 on 1 compettition, please comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 grammer needs a bit of work and the picture makes me think it should have over 2500 attack 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 The pic should make you think it should have more atk! That's ultimate ancient gear golem, which is already a card. Also it has really bad OCG and a bland effect. 3/10. Don't use pics of cards that already exist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 The pic should make you think it should have more atk! That's ultimate ancient gear golem' date=' which is already a card. Also it has really bad OCG and a bland effect. 3/10. Don't use pics of cards that already exist.[/quote'] I didnt actually know that so dont blame me but thanks anywayThere we go. its atk and def has increased Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 Oh yeah, for OCG fix "When this card is Summoned successfully, increase the ATK of all other Machine-Type monsters on the field by 1000." This effect is slightly OP and to weaken it you could add "until the End Phase" or "until this card is removed from the field."at the end and it would be good. That way the ATK gain wouldn't be permanent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted October 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 THANKSi wont change it though because i like learning not just changing it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 major OCG errors, and the effect is very dull Plus this is just Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem's pic 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 i know that its gear golems pic, but i didnt know at first.thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 picture needs changing.FIX:Increase the ATK of all Machine-Type monsters you control by 1000. Effect is boring. Needs another effect.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 I think the effect is oped , you can change to "Increase the ATK of all Machine-Type monsters you control by 500" + 1 more effect" pic is ancient ultima gear golem so 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 ill add another effect, pic may take a bit of time though since i look for my pics on google, most of em are rubbish but ill try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 The pic is from ultaggolem.the rest is bad.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 The pic should make you think it should have more atk! That's ultimate ancient gear golem' date=' which is already a card. Also it has really bad OCG and a bland effect. 3/10. Don't use pics of cards that already exist.[/quote'] This A 5/10 from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadiz Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Pic 0/10 -->original card Effect 3/10 -->overpowered & boringOCG -->needs to be fixedFIX:Increase the ATK of all Machine-Type monsters you control by xxx. Keep trying! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Thank you lexadin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Np, I don't like to give out low rates. And you should try searching on Deviantart.com, they have great pic's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Cheers.there we go1 thanks lexadin, i got this from deviantart.com 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Well quite honestly, by your signature's rating Dmaker, this card achieves a 3.5/10. Its OCG is bad and the image is as well. The effect is to bland and it should be a level 8 since its effect makes its ATK 3000, which is OP for a lvl 7 with no drawbacks. Also its so dull i actually wouldnt consider using it elsewhere. 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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