Z0mg card ;)

[Jonny]

Hope you like it and fix the OCG pl0x im not the best on it :/

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lore:

Each time "Z0mb" destroys a monster, place one "Undead" counter onto this card (Max 5). When this card has 2 "Undead" counters on it, you can select 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and destroy it. When this card has 4 "Undead" counters on it, you can select 2 Monster Cards on the field and send them to the Graveyard. When this card has 5 "Undead" counters on it, you can inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponents Life Points.

;D

[ROY]

As you said your OCG needs work, like 'got' should be changed to 'has', though I do like the picture. overall ~6.5/10

[Jonny]

k fixed thx for OCg fix :D

[ROY]

Okay, so I fixed up your entire effect with better OCG, but if anyone thinks its wrong, it may be, I'm not going to say I'm the best with OCG.

 

Each time “Z0mb” destroys a monster, place one “Undead” counter onto this card (Max 5). When this card has 2 “Undead” counters on it, you can select 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and destroy it. When this card has 4 “Undead” counters on it, you can select 2 Monster Cards on the field and send them to the Graveyard. When this card has 5 “Undead” counters on it, you can inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponents Life Points.

[Jonny]

k thx! :D

[karasu45]

nice card :) and nice pic 9/10 ;)

[Jonny]

ty :D

[Jonny]

BUMP

[ragnarok1945]

since you said it yourself you need to work on the OCG, I'll let it slide a little

 

the effect actually is quite reasonable, so I'll give it 7/10

[Jonny]

thx

[Dmaker]

really cool dude!10/10

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[Jonny]

thx :D

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

FIX:

Each time this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, place one Undead counter onto this card(Max 5). When this card has 2 Undead counters on it, you can select 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and destroy it. When this card has 4 Undead counters on it, you can select 2 Monster Cards on the field and send them to the Graveyard. When this card has 5 Undead counters on it, you can inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

The "Z0mb" bit isnt needed as it refers to itself.

other errors are really minor.

effect is ok.

picture is really overused but oh well.

7/10

[The0]

zombie marvel ! cool i like the pic but i think the effect is little Oped 8/10

[Jonny]

why its oped? you need to destroy atleast 2 monsters to use a effect. :/

[SmallieBigs]

You need OCG work it's just capitalize counter and un-quote undead. It's pretty good it's a typical zombie 0 DEF good job making an original zombie.

[Nishi-chan]

It should have it so you have to remove the Spell Counters, like this:

Each time "Z0mb" destroys a monster, place one Undead counter onto this card (Max 5). You can remove 2 Undead counters from this card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your Opponent's Field. You can remove 3 Undead counter from this card to destroy 2 Monsters on the Field and send them to the Graveyard. You can remove 5 Spell Counters from this card to deal 1000 points of damage to your Opponent.

 

Just a thought

[Arcadiz]

In my opinion the pic looks too magic like...

Balanced card

Overall 7.5/10

[Jonny]

gonna think about it Niashi ;D

 

and thx for the ratings people :D

[Lexadin]

Nice card, the pic is slightly OU (OverUsed) but overal ok.

A 7.7/10

[Jonny]

thx ;)

[Dweller of Parables]

Very unprofessional.

Picture sucks and the OCG needs work.

[Jonny]

dude tbh i fixed my OCG and why does the pic suck?

 

 

ur rate is very "unprofessional". -.-'

[Dweller of Parables]

dude tbh i fixed my OCG and why does the pic suck?

 

 

ur rate is very "unprofessional". -.-'

 

Learn how to type.

Your presentation was off and the whole point is totally oblivious in thought.

I suggest deleting this and starting off with something new and fresh.