Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Ok, ive decided to make a good set of Dot Hack cards since the ones i have already seen hadnt done the series justice. Again, if you are going to comment (which i all hope you do) plz only leave constructive critisizm/praise and if theres something that can be fixed, plz say so...not just "OCG errors", id like to know exactly what needs to be changed if you see something wrong. and now...welcome, to The World... [spoiler=lore]If this monster would be destroyed by battle, you can pay 700 Life Points to destroy the opponent's monster instead.[spoiler=lore]This monster may attack twice during the battle phase. If this monster attacks an opponent's monster with higher ATK than this monster, all "Twilight Knight" monsters gain 1000 ATK until the end phase.[spoiler=lore]This monster may attack twice during the battle phase. If this monster destroys an opponent's monster and sends it to the graveyard, you may tribute this monster to special summon 1 "Twilight Knight - Haseo 2nd Job" from your hand, deck, or graveyard.[spoiler=lore]If this monster is special summoned by the effect of "Twilight Knight - Haseo of the Twilight Brigade", this monster gains 600 ATK. When this monster destroys an opponent's monster, remove it from play. When this monster destroys 2 monsters, you may tribute this monster to special summon "Twilight Knight - Haseo, the Terror of Death" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. (this effect can be activated during either player's battle phase.)[spoiler=lore]If this monster is special summoned by the effect of "Twilight Knight - Haseo 2nd Job", this monster may attack up to 3 times per turn. When this monster destroys an opponent's monster, your opponent must discard 2 cards from their hand. When your opponent discards at least 3 spell cards by this card's effect, you may tribute this monster to special summon "Twilight Knight - Haseo B-st Form" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. (this effect can be activated during either player's turn.)[spoiler=lore]If this monster is special summoned by the effect of "Twilight Knight - Haseo, the Terror of Death", destroy all attack position monsters on the field other than this card. When this monster destroys an opponent's monster, your opponent must send 4 cards off the top of their deck to the graveyard. When your opponent discards at least 6 monster cards by this card's effect, you may tribute this monster to special summon "Twilight Knight - Haseo Xth Form" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. (this effect can be activated during either player's turn.)[spoiler=lore]If this monster is special summoned by the effect of "Dot Hacker - Haseo B-st Form", this monster may attack directly. When this monster attacks, your opponent cannot activate spell or trap card until the end phase. If this monster would be destroyed by battle or by card effect, you may pay 900 Life Points to negate and destroy the card.[spoiler=lore]This monster cannot be destroyed in battle. If this card would be removed from the field, you may discard one card from your hand to negate it.[spoiler=lore]This monster cannot be selected as an attack target as long as there is at least one other monster on your side of the field. Once per turn, you may pay 1000 Life Points to add one "Twilight Knight" card from your deck or graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=lore]When this monster is summoned, you can add one "Twilight Knight - Lady Subaru" from your Deck to your Hand. If a "Twilight Knight" monster on your side of the field would be destroyed, you can tribute this monster instead. Once per turn during your Standby Phase, while this mosnter is in your Graveyard, select one "Twilight Knight" mosnter on your side of the field. That monster cannot be destroyed in battle this turn. I do plan on making many more, so please bear with me! next up... More appearances from .hack//SIGN! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryKing Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Tsukasa wasn't a dot hacker... he was before kite and blackrose...Pictures aren't bad...Haseo and all of his forms are Op'ed6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Tsukasa wasn't a dot hacker... he was before kite and blackrose...Pictures aren't bad...Haseo and all of his forms are Op'ed6/10 that i realize but there was a shortage on naming, and Tsukasa's just as important if not more...>.> yes haseo is Oped xD well i kinda dun wanna touch skeith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryKing Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 well of course tsukasa is important, he started the whole thing lolIf he hadn't found the key, nothing would've ever happened.he could be a different name header thinglike"Cursed Wavemaster - Tsukasa""Friendly Blademaster - Bear"or stuff like that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 When I saw this I was expecting the whole dot hacker group from the original game series.Tsukasa was already mentioned, Mimiru, and Haseo are not Dot Hackers. 8/10 cause I love Dot.Hack. (Ah! It's hard to type when your cat is standing over the keyboard.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 again, i realize this...but its either create archetype dot hacker or make them all jumbled with shaky support >.> still i do agree its hard for me to look at them knowing theyre not. anyway...yeah ill be working more, dont fret. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElderKain Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 I like them ^.^I'm a .hack fan myself ^.^ I guess an Aura card would be one of those cards with ? ATT / ? DEFwith some effect which boosts her stats depending on the card in-play graveyard, etc... Probably something like as long as "Key of the Twilight" is in play, Aura's ATT/DEF is 2500/2500, or something like that. and yes, i'm not really speaking with OCG there, lol i was just giving a small example, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 I would think of making different archtypes for each story. Don't know what there would be for .Hack/Sign, but you could have Dot.Hacker for the first game series and you could do Epitaph for G.U. Just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 I like the idea but the only problem with that is that i plan on including charaters that might not fit the desctiptions... like aura isnt a dot hacker, and alkaid wasnt an epitaph...*sigh* decisions...decisions... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowblade Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Idea! What if you just had their character jobs as Archtypes. That way it connects all the games. You can have Dot.Hacker and/or Epitaph as Sub-Types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 hmm... interesting theory. i like it... oh wait...what do i do when it comes to Wavemaster/Harvest Cleric/Shadow Warlock? i mean...Blademaster/blade brandier is easy to deal with...but yeah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryKing Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 For people before kite and blackrose"Seeker of Twilight - (insert name here)"for people during kite"Dot Hacker - (insert name here)for people after that"G.U. - (insert name here)And you could make versions of a person, that aren't in the archetype, more designed to stand alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 The effects are, for the most part, good. I don't claim to be the most knowledgeble player in the world, in fact, I've only played dot.hack infection, but I like these cards.I see some OCG errors, mostly with capitalization. special summon = Special Summon, set = Set, graveyard = Graveyard, deck = Deck etc. I know some of these words weren't mentioned, but just an example.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 ok, the revisions will take some time, since this is going to turn into a BIG project...so for now...if u have any other suggestions, please leave them here. @storythat...i dont want to do. im trying to successfully create an archetype that they all can fall under so that support cards wont become useless if u dont have say... I have Kite on my field. I draw a card supporting wavemasters or blademasters. see the problem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 I will be renaming the monsters Twillight Knights, so please dont fret, i promise more cards are also on the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megami Seika Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 For right now the only esntials of the cards you have now are Haseo's True 3rd form. And Bear Also the other two main female leads. Atoli not Shino for Roots and on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 Midoraku, do not post your cards in another person's thread. Kailyn, I like how you implemented the Twilight Knights from LINK. A few errors as to names, in LINK Haseo will have only one form/job/class, and his previous B-st Form will then be an entire character of it's own. Also, deck and graveyard should both always be capitalized. I would suggest for Tsukasa to raise the amount of LP needed as it seems a bit overpowered. For example, they summon the best card in their deck or something, attack Tsukasa, and boom it's gone for just 700 Life Points. Also, whenever you put a phase in, like Battle Phase or End Phase, always capitalize them. Also, current OCG dictates that it would be "your field" instead of "the field", for Mimiru. If possible, try to stray away from using anime screenshots for the images. I'm sure there's more OCG errors, but I can't find any =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted May 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 omg talk about sifting thru the pages...didnt think anyone would dig these up.. yeah...I got lazy >.> hmm...maybe if I get un-lazy ill come back and fix these, or better yet...just make more character's cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midoraku Posted May 24, 2010 Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 Good cards but pictures oversized and its bad. And haseo's Xth card is badly overpowered i think. Just undestructible.You began to create Twilight Knigst so i thnk its just neccesary to you create Tokio and Saika cards =))) I really like .hack// series so im started to crate mine cord set based on G.U. games.if anyone wants to see and comment it - welcome:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-204619.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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