TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Just trying this one out. This is my second card I will be posting and I did a lot of changes from the last one. Pic rights go to chrono75 from diviant art Suggestions are happily accepted. This card cannot be special summoned except by sending one "Honest" from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn during your Main Phase designate one monster on your opponent's side of the field. This card gains ATK equal to that of the targeted monster until the end phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 cool! seems pretty balanced. Add this to the last effect:until the End Phase that way, it doesn't gain ridiculous stats.. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Oooooopsies haha everyturn gaining power. I'll make that edit now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Bravo!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 So are the honests already existing or are they apart of a set? It can be very UPD at times, but I guess you'll just have to use it properly. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 UPD? and im a little confused can you restate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chicada Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 UPD = underpowered. nice card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Next card in the set. Magic card on the idea that the Honests are angels and therefore they do angel stuff...sorry its like 1 in the morning here I'm not sure how to explain stuff. You can only activate this card during your end phase. For each of your monsters sent to the graveyard this turn draw 1 card.This is one of my most ridiculous effect monsters yet super mini text. I feel like it might be just a little OPD but you guys Judge. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned when you control one "Honest" or one "Naoto, Bringer of Light". When this monster is Special Summoned it cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps, or Monster effects for 3 of your opponent's turns. This Monster gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of all "Honest" and "Naoto, Bringer of Light" on the field. During each of your End Phases you must send one LIGHT Fairy type monster to the graveyard, if you cannot destroy this card and take damage equal to this card's ATK. :D :D :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 "Move Into the Light" -- Dude, Pot of Greed is banned. And that's only 2 cards @ spell speed 1... this guy would be straight up illegal. "Souji" -- dead draw most of the time, and his effect is more of a cover effect (it's made for an anime) than anything else. I like your first card more. "Naoto" -- good idea, here. She's still going to be a dead draw, seeing as you'll need her AND "Honest" (notice how most decks don't rely on this kind of summoning. If you want this card to be better, I recommend an effect that removes from play "Honest" in the Graveyard and forces you to discard your entire hand when you summon her. That would be just as balancing, and she wouldn't be so much of a dead draw.) She balanced (though not useful at this point). I'll do an full OCGSP revision, and then write the effect that I like better. Original Effect w/Edits:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This cardonly be Special Summoned by discarding 1 "Honest". Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can target 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. This card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the targeted monster until your next End Phase. Effect with different Summoning Requirement:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Honest" in your Graveyard and discarding your entire hand. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can target 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. Until your next End Phase, this card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the targeted monster. There you go! And good luck! Warm Regards,:mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 FIX:For Card 1This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 "Honest" from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase select 1 monster your opponent controls. This card gains ATK equal to that of the selected monster until the End Phase of this turn. For Card 2You can only activate this card during your End Phase. Draw 1 card for each monster sent to the Graveyard by a card effectFor Card 3This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while you control 1 "Honest" or 1 "Naoto, Bringer of Light". When this monster is Special Summoned it cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps, or Effect Monster effects for 3 of your opponent's turns. This card gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of all "Honest" and "Naoto, Bringer of Light" on the field. During each of your End Phases you must send 1 LIGHT Fairy-Type monster you control [i suppose?] to the Graveyard, if you cannot destroy this card and take damage equal to this card's ATK. ocg corrected. effects are ok, the second card is a tad boring though. maybe add an effect or two to spice it up.overall, a decent effort.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 lol "spice it up". Sounds like we're eating cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 well duh....Paprika oughta go good with this.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Uhhhhh Thanks? I'll add some paprika Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Sorrry if this is too soon but Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 UPD? and im a little confused can you restate? Well, it can be UPd becuase it only gains half the opponenets ATK. Even if there is a blue eyes on the field, the ATK only ends up at 2500, making it not even strong enough to defeat the blue eyes. Thats why you have to be wise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Where does it say half? The card doesnt say half anywhere on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Nice cards. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Where does it say half? The card doesnt say half anywhere on it ........Hmmmm I could've sworn I saw it gain half the ATK. O well, Sry about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 No problem I wasnt even sure when you said it. Half the atk seems a little more realistic but it is supposed to be like honest's little sister so she has to be kick ass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Yeah, and since she is so difficult to summon, she pretty much has to be super powerful. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Made edits to Move into the light here they are You can only activate this card during the End Phase of either player's turn. For each LIGHT Fairy monster sent to the Graveyard by card effect this turn draw one card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 OCG Fix: This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 "Honest" from your hand to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase designate one monster on your opponent's side of the field. This card gains ATK equal to that of the targeted monster until the End Phase. 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Callin in the Bumper cars BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Not bad its OP but the Hrd to Summon Removes it the rest it's ok and the image is pretty good.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Epic Bumpage. should i stop until I make more cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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