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Decay Dragon


Kalametor

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Lore:Bysending 1 Spell/Trap card from your hand to the Graveyard you can destroy 1 Spell/Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed an opponent's Spell/Trap card by this effect Special Summon 1 "Decay Dragon LV7" from your hand or Deck.

 

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Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set except by the effect of "Decay Dragon LV5". By sending 1 Spell/Trap card from your hand to the Graveyard, destroy all Spell/Trap cards on your opponent's side of the field.

 

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Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Decay Dragon LV7" on your side of the field. By sending 1 Spell/Trap card from your hand to the Graveyard, destroy all Spell/Trap cards on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Dont want to take too much credit cause i kinda copied the whole idea of the Armed Dragon set. =P

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I acknowledge that you at least tried putting some effort into OCG, but your cards are very unoriginal. Copying off of an official set (or even custom cards) of cards just shows that you were too lazy to actually come up with effects. You need to work on putting spaces and punctuation, because you're not gonna score points here or get through school if you don't. "Bysending" really bothers me.

 

If you don't want to read that huge paragraph, read this break down and score instead:

Originality: 1/10 (Copying off of AD = unoriginal)

OCG: 6/10 (good, but several errors bring this down)

Pics: 10/10 (really good, though I'm sure they're pretty overused)

Overall: 5.7/10

In short, if you can fix a bit of your OCG and punctuation and actually come up with ideas, you'd be a great card maker.

Sorry for being harsh, though.

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