Hockeygoalie1 Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 [spoiler=Jason Blake] [spoiler=Mats Sundin] [spoiler=Wayne Gretzky] [spoiler=Bobby Orr] [spoiler=Joe DiMaggio] [spoiler=Mario Lemieux] [spoiler=Alexander Ovechkin] [spoiler=Evgeni Malkin] [spoiler=Mike Palmateer] [spoiler=Sidney Crosby] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waffleman123 Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Finnally someone else who likes hockey:) I love these cards no matter how many errors they have.Heres mine:[spoiler=Roberto Luongo] [spoiler=Daniel Sedin] [spoiler=Henrik Sedin] [spoiler=Sedin Twins] Thanks to google for all the pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espada Oscura Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Urm... why is Mats Sundin a Union Sub-Type? Vannilas aren't the hight of YGO fashion (quotations buzzing above my head). OP'ed... but not bad pics. You're new so I wont rate until you improve them... at least a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hockeygoalie1 Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 It's rude to post your cards in other peoples threads!!! But thank's for the inspiration Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waffleman123 Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 sorry about the rudeness;)My cards are pretty sweet though eh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Too queer to rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waffleman123 Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 LOL i love gretzky but in my mind he should be ATK:9999 DEF:9999 just because he's the great one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hockeygoalie1 Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Too queer to rate. That's mean... at least give me some advice........ but you still don't know anything about hockey so it's hard for you to give advice!Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waffleman123 Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Too queer to rate. That's mean... at least give me some advice........ but you still don't know anything about hockey so it's hard for you to give advice!Sorry You tell him Hockeygoalie1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hockeygoalie1 Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 that's right waffleman123!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 It's a noob fest and Jolta. They're very bad. Types make no sense, effects are dumb and do nothing, pics aren't too bad though. My advice, make real effects and lower their stats. Make sure the types make sense and if they have a sub-type like 'Toon', make sure they have a Toon Monster's effect. And waffleman123, it is AGAINST THE RULES to post your cards in another's thread (I should report you but I won't). I'm not rating these for your sake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Oh, I'll tell ya what t do. Make them ALL Vanillas. Then I'll rate them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 lol. i like hockey but no offense but this are bad. i am a leafs fan so i say this with respet for the LEafs. THESE CARDS SUCK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hockeygoalie1 Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 lol. i like hockey but no offense but this are bad. i am a leafs fan so i say this with respet for the LEafs. THESE CARDS SUCK! You don't know aything about hockey these cards are sick Wayne Gretzky and Bobby Orr!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espada Oscura Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Alright, they're a lot better now that they're all Vannillas. I still think they're OP'edbut now they're fixed without effets it makes sense. Not too bad, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 It doesn't matter if people know about hockey or not. We're rating your cards as cards, not as people. They're much better now they are all vanillas and there are no stupid effects and subtypes, although there are still types that don't make sense. Here's your next tip, don't EVER make Divine monsters or in this case, Divine monsters. And please lower their stats! I have to give you credit though, most noobs can't make spoilers or edit their posts, and you can do both. Edit your title now though, because you also have Joe DiMaggio. Still not rating these yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espada Oscura Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Destron has a point, it doesn't really matter if we know about hockey or not, but you need to bring down your card's ATK and DEF before we can rate them seriously. I think you've made their Types like their position, but DO NOT make ANY Divine cards, so you need to change Jason Blake. And you might want to take out Joe DiMaggio, because this thread is called "Hockey cards" not "Baseball Cards". If you need hlep with anything about making cards, PM me and I'll try to explain it. Take our constructive criticizm and improve! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Hockey Cards wut Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 WAY OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espada Oscura Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 FusionXD is also correct. You should bring down their atk and def. it makes sense that they still dont even have effects, but even Blue Eyes White Dragon only had 3000 ATK and 2500 DEF, and thats like the highest ever for a nomal monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmallieBigs Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Ummm this is original but Wayne Gretzhy wasn't a goal scorer he never fought. He was an assist monger but yeah Op'd a bit. P.S Gretzky was nothing ompared to Mario Lemeiux and Bobby Orr also Gordie Howe.EDIT: Like dude you could never make a deck out of these cards just putting all these in is suicide. Toronto sucks. Also the goalie sucks that you put in make a variety of players from hockey teams. P.S.S Ken Dryden is the ultimate goalie. Also make the flavour text well more flavourful.EDIT #2: 3/10.EDIT #3: Wow that was retarded Sidney Crosby in a tootoo that card is a joke card. Also I don't see more team variety listen to team variety I don't see rangers, calgary, islanders, sharks, kings, boston, detroit well you get the point if you don't know any hockey teams I advise going to a hockey site. And no this is not advertising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poseidon© Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 They suck ass. VANNILA BAD GRAMMER AND SPELLING 3/10 Sorry if it's a bit harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espada Oscura Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Ummm this is original but Wayne Gretzhy wasn't a goal scorer he never fought. He was an assist monger but yeah Op'd a bit. P.S Gretzky was nothing ompared to Mario Lemeiux and Bobby Orr also Gordie Howe.EDIT: Like dude you could never make a deck out of these cards just putting all these in is suicide. Toronto sucks. Also the goalie sucks that you put in make a variety of players from hockey teams. P.S.S Ken Dryden is the ultimate goalie. Also make the flavour text well more flavourful.\EDIT #2: 3/10. Sorry, so true. But still, just bring down ATK and DEF, make flavor text better, include more players from teams, and your Ok. Remeber I showed you how to update and post cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waffleman123 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 sorry for posting my cards i didnt know it was illegal. and who cares if the cards are VANNILAS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Horizon Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Nice idea going with Hockey. A few problems though that can be easily changed. The types are all far too random and non-existent. I think it would help the cards and the realism if you made them "Warrior"s, a real type with support and group consistency to boot. Then the Attributes would work more if they were all EARTH. If you wanted though, you could make the one you have labeled as "DIVINE" a "FIRE" monster, to represent him being a star player, on fire, etcetera. Then their stats are all overpowered by regular standards. Try lowering their ATK/DEF around the 2500 range, and their stars to 7 and 8. Then bring some monsters down to the Level 5 and 6 range, and decrease their stats to around 2200. And finally bring some of them to around level 4 and base their stats somewhere around 1500 and you're golden. Finally, you should aim to give them all some relevant and useful effects. For example, an offensive player should have a destructive effect, while the goalie should have a defensive one. Players that work together on the field should help each other with their effects, and your star player should be special summoned by tributing some of the other players? See what I mean? Expand upon that! As of now you have a 6/10 for the idea and the effort, let's see you work on the details now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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