.Nu-13 Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 2 cards based on End of the World:[spoiler=Lore]This card can't be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can't be Special Summoned except be the "Armageddon". This card can't be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. When this card battles, destroy all other cards on the field. Then, Special Summon 1 "End Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK ?/DEF ?) to your side of the field. Its ATK is equal to the amount of destroyed cards x 300. (Don't say End's King is Op'ed, i know this :)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Cool.I now King's overpowered but duo the hard to summon effect it stays ok.But reduce the TOKENS gain attack to 300 for each card.The rest is good.8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Put "on" insted of "ob" xD by the end's king neat effects but the pic of second card could be beter :/ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Put "on" insted of "ob" xD by the end's king neat effects but the pic of second card could be beter :/ 8/10 man, what a mistake i made! hahaha, ok, i'll change that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 lol :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 ok, End's King updated. How's OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 it's pretty good ^^ no other errors that i see :Dbut put the effect under the card becaus its bit hard to read :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 you mean, no OCG errors?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 All seems ok, I won't say anything about OP.However the second pic is not that good.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Pics are ok, but the 2nd is a little confuse. About the effects, they'r ok, but write the effect of the 2ND out, because some people can't read it.~~[A-]~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 good cards8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 ok, i'll change the 2ND pic and add Lorechanged Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Ah much better, now it's a 8.7/10 (I rate high on pic's) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 but what's with OCG??? Is there are any errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 I update one of my card with that pic.The one for the second card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 so? do you have a problem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 can't=cannot, "By the effect of "Ar..",Everything else seems ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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