Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 these are two new cards i made, please rate and tell me any errors they might have Spellcaster Mega, Dark Witch: [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Special Summon by the effect of the card "Spellcaster Tri-Fuse." When this card is summoned it can only attack once every three turns. Also once every three three turns you can Special Summon one Spellcaster Type Monster from either player's Graveyard to your side of the Field. If there are more then seven Spellcaster Type Monsters in your or your opponent's Graveyard this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. Spellcaster Tri - Fuse: [spoiler=Effect]If this card is on your Field, and you have three or more Spellcaster Type Monsters on your Field this card is automatically activated. This card is flipped face down if there is less then three Spellcaster Type Monsters on your opponents or your opponent’s side of the Field. Once this card is flipped up for more then three consecutive turns, you can sacrifice three Spellcaster Type Monsters from your side of the Field to summon "Spellcaster Mega, Dark Witch". Dragon Mega, Lord of the Dragons: [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Special Summon by the effect of the card "Dragon Tri-Fuse." When this card is summoned it can only attack once every three turns. Also once every three turns you can send to the graveyard one card on the field. By allowing your opponent to destroy three monster cards from you deck, you can summon one dragon type monster from you hand of deck with equal number of stars as the destroyed monsters. Dragon Tri - Fuse: [spoiler=Effect]If this card is on your Field, and you have three or more Dragon Type Monsters on your Field this card is automatically activated. This card is flipped face down if there is less then three Dragon Type Monsters on your or your opponent’s side of the Field. Once this card is flipped up for more then three consecutive turns, you can sacrifice three Dragon Type Monsters from your side of the Field to summon "Dragon Mega, Lord of the Dragons". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 That pic is already for a real card called Violet Witch. But I like the effort put into this.8.8/10(find a new pic if possible) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 oh... woopsok, fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kivoxo Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 might want to changed Addition to Edition, i like the effort but it kinda lacks use because chances of having 3 spell casters on both sides of the field are pretty slim, also might want to change Spellcaster Mega, Dark Warlock to just Mega Dark Warlock or Spellcaster, Mega Dark Warlock because the type of the card is already written on its lore box thing. A for effort but 7.5/10 for overall cardage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Bind Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 card 1) 9/10good pic great OCG card 2) 7/10 Fuzzy pic good ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 FIX for card 1This card can only be Special Summoned by the effects of "Spellcaster Tri-Fuse." This card can only declare an attack every third turn. If there are more then 7 Spellcaster-Type monsters in your or your opponent's Graveyard, this card gains 500 attack.Effect is boring. Very lacking. Needs more considering the requirements. (Also, remove the tri-fusion bit. its unrealistic)5/10 FIX for card 2This card can only be activated while you control 3 or more Spellcaster-Type monsters. If there are fewer than 3 Spellcaster-Type monsters on your side of the field, this card is destroyed. When this card is activated, treat it as a Continuous Spell Card. This card remains on your side of the field for 3 turns. On the 3rd turn after this card's activation, Tribute all Spellcaster-Type monsters you control to Special Summon 1 "Spellcaster Mega - Dark Warlock" from your hand or Deck.Second card is ok, picture is pretty good. effect is a bit too much considering the monster its summoning. 5.5/10 overall, an ok effort but nothing to flashy. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Queer, I like :D9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 @Kivoxo: well, i made it that hard to summon as a drawback, so it wasnt op'ed, but aperantly its up'ed. i also made the name like that because its basically the ultimate spellcaster monster. and thanks about edition @•_•BENNY•_•NOOB•_•: thanks, the second pic was blurry because i made it myself, but i coulnd find a good pic of magician of black chaos. @Sephiroth_The_Legend: thanks for the imput, i was thiking, also going with the 7 cards in the graveyard thing, dark warlock could (every three turs) not attack and bring back a spellcaste from the grave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 uhhh just making a correction to something someone said the card pic IS now Nights end sorcerer. Its a real card for that your getting a 6/10 not to discourage you just edit it with a new pic and then your golden with a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Both pics arent the bests.Ideia is quite interesting, though.B-.~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 @TheVaron: really?... really? @DHPlasma: thank you. @Gijinka: the first pic., i have to change, and the second i made myself with paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Pulling that off would be really hard... Kinda unrealistic. Fun though.(not enough rep to post accurate rating, but imo its 8/10+) And I'd like Attack 3 Times per Turn instead of once per 3 turns, since its really hard to get out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 ok i fixed it again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 To let you know, the card's picture already exists on a real Yu-Gi-Oh card ("Dharc the Dark Charmer" google it if you like if you don't believe). The ATK is pretty high but you balanced it out with only allowing it to attack every 3 turns. Also, fix your OCG. Overall, the picture already exists on a real Yu-Gi-Oh card and the effect is alright and balanced somewhat. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 ok, i'll fix it when i get home, but if i end up using another real card pic., i'm gonna kill someone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 I would give these cards a grade of A- for the fact for few OCG corrections and great pics:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 ok, i fixed it for the last time (i know this cause the pic is from deviant art) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
To-Chi Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Not bad, but not good. OCG errors (mostly capitalization and some minor phrasings) deter from much love, but I like the cocept. Yeah, overall could be better with some more work. Obligatory Rating: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 well, thanks, but if you could actually show me the errors, that would be awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Okay that is the greatest pic for Tri-Fusion know that you changed it. MAKE ANOTHER TRI-FUSION!!!9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
To-Chi Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 It's just a bunch of small errors; special summon => Special Summon, attack => ATK, stuff like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 well yeah, that's why I put 9.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 if your looking for the errors you made, refer to my earlier post.i corrected your ocg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 @Psychicplayer: well thanks. by tri fusions pic is awesome did you mean the card spellcaster tri - fuse, or spellcaster mega? @To-Chi: ok, I'll fix 'em now. @Sephiroth_The_Legend: well, i didn't really agree with some of the changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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