Zigaknot Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 This is my first card so id appreciate any feed back and any grammer corrections ^^ Effect:Magic or trap cards equipped to this monster only last for one turn, when this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of a magic or trap card you deal 500 point of damage to your opponents life points for every card sent to the graveyard as a result of this cards effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Well for a new member it's ok.And awsome pic.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Magic or trap cards equipped to this monster only lasts for 1 turn, when this card is sent to the graveyard by the effect of a magic or trap card, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponents life points for every card sent to the graveyard by this cards effect. Overall, I think its a good card. Pic is way overused tho, but since your new, I won't deduct. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guiller09 Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 bad oooooooccccccccccccccggggggggggggg000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Effect:When an Equip Spell Card is equipped to this card it only remains on the field until the End Phase of the turn it was activated. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by a Spell or Trap Card effect, you can deal Effect Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of card sent to the Graveyard by this cards effect x500. Think that sounds a little better to me. Hope the rewrite helps a little. Nice pic really cool!! and a wicked name with balanced ATK/DEF points If I rewrote the effect write I like that too so a big 9/10 for you!! Very interesting card, keep up the good work player Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 the OCG correction is already up very impressive burn effect, pic looks quite good as well, did you get this off DA? 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigaknot Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Yeh i did the artist user name is GENZOMAN. Thanks for rating :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Hmm... OCG is teh only prob Cool and aweome effect!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Not bad. 9/10.I like the unique effect. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 quite unique indeed. ocg fix is done already. picture is good but i swear ive seen it before but oh well.effect is good and can result in quite major burn damage if used correctly. Do equip cards get sent to the Graveyard after the turn or do they remain equipped and they're effects are negated, if they're sent to the grave,Supervise + This = Fun Fun Fun9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 sweetness :p 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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