Strawberry Mistress Anita (A Tuner!?)

[J-Max]

[align=center]By looking at the title you may be thinking "Has J-Max gone mad!? He never makes a Tuner!" But I decided to attempt one today. Also on my long road to recovery as a Card Maker and as practise for Pokevolution. I present to you the latest in my Strawberry set. For the Members who don't know, I designed a Strawberry Set a while back based around the premise of "Strawberry Counters" At the moment I am feeling extremely Retro and have decied to go back and touch up on my old projects.

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-57207.html (My Strawberry Mistress Karen)

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=46308 (2 Other Strawberry Cards)

 

Pic found on a Hentai Site

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by removing up to 4 Strawberry Counters on face-up monsters you control. The Level of this face-up card is equal to the number of Strawberry Counters on it. Also increase the ATK & DEF of this card by 300 for each Strawberry Counter on the field. By removing 2 Strawberry Counters from this card you can Special Summon 1 "Strawberry" monster from your Deck. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can discard 1 card from your hand to double the Level of this card. [/align]

[Metal Skull]

LOL if you are Synchro Summoning double the card level makes nothing, because to Synchro Summon you need the right start level so you can't double to make the number of stars right during Synchro Summon.

8/10

Like your idea but be carefull with those impossible things^^

[J-Max]

Sorry i'm new to Tuners :p Wouldn't the Leveling doubling be part of a Chain?

[Frozen Judgment]

On a hentai site? Seriously? O.o Anyways, good OCG, good pic (Wow... hentai), balanced. Not sure about the last sentence though. Not entirely sure what the rulings are in that situation. Maybe you should word it differently.

 

8.4/10

[Force_Flex]

[align=center]Try making it something like "If this card is used in a Synchro Summon, you can discard cards from your hand to increase the level of this card by the amount of cards discarded." Maybe something like that?

I think that it's alright, but if you get a lot of counters on the field, that's one powerful card.[/align]

[Max Darkness]

[spoiler=OCG Fixes and Suggestions]

The Level of this face-up card is equal to the number of Strawberry Counters on it.

 

Need to add an upper limit to the number of Strawberry Counters you can have on it.

 

 

Also increase the ATK & DEF of this card by 300 for each Strawberry Counter on the field.

 

You don't need the 'Also'. OCG Fix: 'This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each...'

 

 

By removing 2 Strawberry Counters from this card you can Special Summon 1 "Strawberry" monster from your Deck.

 

I'd add an upper Level limit for this effect otherwise it could become overpowered.

 

 

If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can discard 1 card from your hand to double the Level of this card.

 

Could become overpowered. If it's Level 3, you've got a Level 6 Tuner and all you've done is discard 1 card. High-level Tuners are rare for a reason. They make Synchro Summoning too easy.

 

 

 

 

Overall, near-perfect OCG and an interesting effect. Just has a few holes in it.

 

9/10