wero-vasto Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 I Love the Images :D the effects are balanced and i love it :Di have the idea to do a set like this but you win :D it's amazing maybe i just change the image of the God but it's fantastic the entire set so far 11/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 ^.^I can only handle so many smiles before I get dizzy XDThanks :)(It's hard to find Desert/Sand cards without finding Gaara XD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Nice for your first set. I absolutely <3 it, it's like the new take on the Venom archetype, with more Tribute-related effects. Overall, 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Yay ^.^ Thanks Xaru (I got it right...right?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Card 1= IMG is darling! As for it's effect: In this case it's OP lies within it's Sand Counters effect. This will cause the duel to result in a draw no matter what unless both player are playing with more then 4000 LP. If there are 10 cards on the field that means both players lose 4000 LP which means loss. Perhaps reduce the amount of damage taken to 200 because you have to take into account the amount of cards playable. Meaning the field has a max of 20 cards which if this effect was activated while 20 cards lay on the field thats 6000 damage dealt to both players.6/10 Card 2= Amazing IMG. Fits perfectly with the Archtype. As for the effect: It might be a tad OP since it takes a 1500 chuck from your opponent. Were as the Desert Counters dont seem to have any effects. This card is good but it doesnt seem to be thought out as well as it could have been.7/10 Card 3= Again Astounding picture. The effect is also balanced and well thought out.9/10 Card 4= Good IMG. It's effect is fine and well balanced. 9/10 Card 5= The image, I am sad to say, is disappointing. It is a real picture which makes it unrealistic in YuGiOh sense. The effect is OP. The fist burn effect is alright but the last effect is OP. You can reduce the damage to a mere 300 to balance it since this card will most likely not be destroyed until you have a good amount of WD in your graveyard. And it also counts to once placed in there before it was activated which means no matter what your opponent will recieve to much damage for a simple field spell.5/10 Card 6= IMG is good. Its effect is slightly OP for a level 4 monster. You could that King card in your graveyard to use this effect on. This can be abused with savagery. 6/10 Card 7= Picture isnt up to your usual par but it's ok. You need to be more details when you say "add to your hand". From where? You cant leave that hanging to the imagination. This cards OCG is off as well. I cannot fix it at the moment but I will. This is OP. It locks your opponent almost completely from tribute summoning which means they cannot do much against this deck.6/10 Card 8= The image is good and up to Par, however your effect is not. This card has no drawbacks and is full of bonus' which forces it into teh OP zone. Your opponent takes your damage, you get to summon a monster, and if you control your field spell then you summon that king guy just at the cost of 1000 LP. You need to scrap one of the bonus' and replace it with a drawback to balance it. OCG is bad here too.6/10 Card 9= Your image is good, your effect is ok. This can be abused easily and thus decimate your opponent. You can set this card and switch your monsters to defense so your opponent attacks and you destroy all their monsters leaving them open for attacks.7/10 Card 10= Good pic. Terribly OP effect. That is almost self explanitory. Free King thats all I need say.4/10 This deck on the whole is way to much of a burn effect deck which makes it OP and this would be the very first deck list that would be directly banned. Your focusing to much on burning that your forgeting to make liable support and well structured cards. Activate only when an opponents monster Declares an ATK. Destroy all ATK position monsters on the field and inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each of your destroyed monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Horray for honesty! XDThanks, I'll work on them. I find it to be almost, if not, impossible to find a anime-cartoonish desert that'd fit. Also, the original image on nubmer ten came with the sand-like smoke, and I thought it'd be fine. But I was dead wrong. As for them being OP'd, I see where your coming from. I'll take your advice, and use it to balance out my cards. Thanks for the great advice! Your getting +1 Rep :) EDIT:I hoped the Desert Counters would not have an effect, being as if they did, chances are they'd overdrive OP into the next gear...at least depending on their effect.MmmkI changed the effects of those I felt needed change.However...I did not change the pics since I can not find anything worth changing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelvin1262 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Haha, yeah, I've been playing since it came out, so I know my stuff pretty well. It's just that I haven't been on this forum for months now. I'm sorry to say, but your card No.6, 9, and 10 are OP. 6 is quite OP, since you could potentially inflict 3k of burn damage, and has no drawback. If you don't want to change the effect, you could probably put in something like you take half of whatever your opponent takes. 9 is OP as well, although not as much. As the lady above says, it can be abused easily. The last one is probably the most OP. No tributes? Holy crap. Defeats Zombie World or Mask of Restrict, and the monster name and image has nothing to do with the effect. I would make it a spell card, and put in a pay 400 LP x the amount of tributes needed or something similar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Alright I'm going to redo the cards (still need to do the images...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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