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New summoning conditions and effects are fun :P

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If your hand has 2 cards or less, you can Normal Summon this card without any Tributes. The ATK & DEF of this card are equal to the difference between both player's hand size x 1000. During each of your Draw Phases, if your opponent has more cards than you, you can pay 1000 Life Points to draw cards until you have the same number of cards as your opponent. If this effect is activated, you must discard the same number of cards drawn to your Graveyard during your End Phase.[/align]

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I really like this. The picture fits the card itself, and the effect is good. I feel that it can be a bit abusive by DaD though, seeing as how you can drain your deck until you draw it and you'll prob have enogh in the Grave by that time anyway. I feel that it is leaning on the OPed side a bit, seeing as how you could set all your cards just to summon it...

 

Anyway, overall rating is 8.7/10

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Hey, this Archtype sounds familiar, did you submit a monster of the same Archtype to some Contest or Something?

 

OCG: A 10/10, nothing to see here

 

Pic: OK, Smexy, at least you didn't get it from a Hentai Site.

 

The rest: The Pic and type and stuff suit the name.

 

OK, The Level 8 non-Vanilla Version of Dark Magician? Aweshumness! Hey, its effect reminds me of the effect of one of the 3 gods.

 

10/10

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I know you'll respect the opinion of a Legend, so, I'll go ahead and say what I think:

 

The OCG feels off.

I really don't see how the pic fits it.

The effect is quite good, and original. Infi Cards + constant distruction = Win with this

I feel like the last effect, the drawing till you have the same as your opponent, seems like a random add on. Not bad, just has a very random feel.

 

If I had to rate it without a review, it would probably be 5 or 6/10, compared to your others works.

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Thanks for the honest rate C-2. This card was for a contest so I was forced to follow a strict Target, I usually downgrade slightly. As for the Pic? What's wrong with it? It's supposed to dictate a Witch that can control time. She has the ability to fast forward time to refresh your hand but reverses it during the End Phase.

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I see How members are giving better rates for a Legendary too

Well the OCG

Needs Improvement

The Grammer is good but you put the words in the wrong places of the sentence

Also Tribute/Release

Thats the New OCG

Picture is Nice

But really you need to use a New style of Pictures

Name is Great too

I could'int think of a Great Name

OCG Thats all that needs to be fixed

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both player's hand size = the number of card in each player's hand (unless of course you are actually referring to hand size ;))

 

Good card, the image is nice in itself, and the OCG is fine, its just that some things are worded in a way that sound wrong. Also, no need to say "to the Graveyard" after "discard", since it is implied.

 

As for the name, I think its pretty good, but "Enchantress" just makes it sound too long, maybe find a synonymous word with 1 syllable. It would sound better that way in my opinion.

 

It is an interesting effect, and seems fairly balanced, even though there are many cards that could be used with this, it still is open to Spell/Trap/Monster effects.

 

Because of the draw power the second effect provides, along with the discard effect, this could be useful in a Dark World deck.

 

8.5/10

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