Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 Lore:You can Tribute Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 1 Zombie-Type monster you control. If you Tribute Summon this card with 1 Tribute, it's original ATK becomes 1000. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 2, you can look at the top card of your Deck. If it is a Monster Card, you can reveal it to your opponent. Then, your opponent must reveal 1 Monster Card in their hand whose ATK is greater than the ATK of the monster you revealed, if your opponent has no monsters in their hand, your opponent can add 1 monster card from their Graveyard to their hand. If the ATK of your monster is higher, Special Summon the monster you revealed to your side of the field. It's effect(s) is negated while it remains face-up on the field. If your opponent's monster has more ATK than the monster you revealed, Special Summon your opponent's monster to your opponent's side of the field. If the top card of your Deck was not a Monster Card, return the card to the bottom of your Deck. Let me know what you think..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 op'ed too many advantages plus the high stats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 If they have to show a monster in the hand whose atk is stronger, then the monsters atk will be stronger. Odd effects, need to be a little more specific. and is not op'ed.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 phew, that was somewhat complicated, but I get what you mean. However, this sentence contridicts the rest of the effect. Then, your opponent must reveal 1 Monster Card in their hand whose ATK is greater than the ATK of the monster you revealed Becuase the rest of the effect states if the ATK of your monster is higher. Other than that, I love it. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 If they have to show a monster in the hand whose atk is stronger' date=' then the monsters atk will be stronger. Odd effects, need to be a little more specific. and is not op'ed.8/10[/quote'] you pick up the top card of your deck. IF its a monster, reveal it. then your opponent reveals a monster in their hand. there's 2 possible scenariosYour Monsters ATK is higher = If the ATK of your monster is higher, Special Summon both monsters to your side of the field. Their effect(s) are negated while they remain face-up on the fieldTheir monsters ATK is higher = If your opponent's monster has more ATK than the monster you revealed, Special Summon both monsters to your opponent's side of the field. Their effect(s) are negated while they remain face-up on the fieldIn other words, 1 player will have 2 monsters after the effect resolves.second effect i presume is fairly self-explanatory Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 If they have to show a monster in the hand whose atk is stronger' date=' then the monsters atk will be stronger. Odd effects, need to be a little more specific. and is not op'ed.8/10[/quote'] This card has the stats of blue eyes, a strong normal monster + the fact this card is an effect monster, you already got something more powerful than a BEWD, but it even goes a step further because its a multi-functional effect, with too many subtle advantages.1st its allows you to do and easier summon of itself, by giving up 1000 atk strength, that's not even half the loss of its original atk, not that 2000 atk 1 tributer monsters are unheard of but that definitely is a tricky effect. I actually like this idea, but I think either the attack or its other effects should take more of a hit if you use the adjustable tributer amount effect. 2nd it allows you to look at your card prior to a draw and then possibly your opponents as well, that where it gets overpowering. Its bad enough you get to check what card you have coming before it comes, but then if its a monster your opponent must happen to have a monster with higher attack, what happens if the opponent doesn't even have a monster in his hand? 3rd if your opponent does have a monster but its not stronger, then you not only get to take your opponents monster but you get to special summons both of them onto your side. I think the stealing part is too overpowering. 4th on top of everything else, this card is capable of clearing the field. With only a single type immune. 5th it can take this a step further and just nuke the field entirely Where are the drawbacks, other than reducing the strength of this high atk monster, and maybe some bargain cost. Yeah I think its a little overpowered :-? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 If they have to show a monster in the hand whose atk is stronger' date=' then the monsters atk will be stronger. Odd effects, need to be a little more specific. and is not op'ed.8/10[/quote'] This card has the stats of blue eyes, a strong normal monster + the fact this card is an effect monster, you already got something more powerful than a BEWD, but it even goes a step further because its a multi-functional effect, with too many subtle advantages..1st its allows you to do and easier summon of itself, by giving up 1000 atk strength, that's not even half the loss of its original atk, not that 2000 atk 1 tributer monsters are unheard of but that definitely is a tricky effect. I actually like this idea, but I think either the attack or its other effects should take more of a hit if you use the adjustable tributer amount effect. should i adjust to half? i believe the attack part of this card is hardly the problem. 2nd it allows you to look at your card prior to a draw and then possibly your opponents as well, that where it gets overpowering. Its bad enough you get to check what card you have coming before it comes, but then if its a monster your opponent must happen to have a monster with higher attack, what happens if the opponent doesn't even have a monster in his hand? The card is looked at in Main Phase 2. i forgot to mention that if its not a monster it is returned to the bottom of the deck. Ill fix it now. ill also fix for if your opponent doesnt have a monster. 3rd if your opponent does have a monster but its not stronger, then you not only get to take your opponents monster but you get to special summons both of them onto your side. I think the stealing part is too overpowering. thats the idea though. there's a chance you'll pick up some dodgy monster with little atk and your opponent has a beatstick in their hand (i.e. Barbaros) 4th on top of everything else, this card is capable of clearing the field. With only a single type immune. Just the monsters. 5th it can take this a step further and just nuke the field entirely if there's anything left. Plus, it destroys itself. Plus it's main phase 2. so no OTK possible. Where are the drawbacks, other than reducing the strength of this high atk monster, and maybe some bargain cost. Yeah I think its a little overpowered :-? Ill change it around Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 you should consider either omitting the 4th or 5th effect, and also the stealing part/special summoning effect should be limited to the opponent's stolen monster, not your monster as well, your monster should go back into your deck. and yeah if you tribute only with 1 monster you only have 1500 ATK, basically each monster tributed represents 1500 ATK power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 i disregarded the 5th effect.i would add the extra limitations you stated but that would cause the effect to become too long and then the card image wont generate. i made the ATK 1000. because of the strong effect.he will get run over by pretty much anything....as for the stealing effect, i would add an extra limitation but like i said before it wont fit on the card.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 well having this card be able to special summon 2 monsters on the same turn is kind of too powerful for a 1 tributer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 quite true. might have to alter it a bit. ill c what i can do.wow...thats a long, might have broken a record with this card's effect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 one REALLY long effect you got there Personally I'd remove the very last effect (it's a little OPed) to balance it out more 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 ok, ill remove the last effect.should keep everyone happy ay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 now it should be just fine, I'll raise my rate to 9.1/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Cheers Rag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.