ComingSoonNOT123 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 a tribute to judgment dragon! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, expect by returning all card(s) from your Graveyard, to your Deck. Place a Darkness Counter (max 1) on every card returned by this effect. When a card with a Darkness Counter is drawn you must discard it. When this card destroys a monster Non-DARK monster by battle you can draw 1 card, if the drawn card has a Darkness Counter you can Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard. While this card remains face-up on the field it gain(s) the effect of all continuous Effect Monsters effect in both player's Graveyard. Once per turn by discarding 1 DARK monster, your opponent must reveal his/her hand. If any of the revealed cards is a Trap Card you can Set it on your side of the field. During your End Phase you must send 1 DARK monster from your Deck to the Graveyard with a Level equal to the amount of card(s) in your hand. If you cannot destroy all card(s) you control. While this card is in your Graveyard during each of your End Phase destroy all DARK monsters you control..sorry for the long loreplease rate and comment!NOTE: my 9th card FINALLY!!!!!! I feel proud :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 If no one rates your card it means they don't want to rate it. Now onto your card. The effect is cheap. Allowing you to draw when it kills a non-DARK monster is cheap and the effects that it gets for each DARK effect monster in the graveyard is real cheap especially due to the gigantic amount of monsters that are DARK and that also have really useful effects like Jinzo and Dark Ruler Ha Des just to list a few. Even with the last 2 effects this card is probably unlikely to go to the graveyard unless your opponent can manage to kill it with anything they have. The OCG is mediocre. Overall, fix your OCG, make the effect more balanced because all the player that is going to use this card has to do is build a deck with loads of DARK monsters (like I mentioned before some DARK monsters have real good effects) and they're pretty much set for using this card, and get a better picture for this card; a head and neck shot of a dragon for a picture looks pretty bad. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 I'm not impressed with the image. Also, it has an autograph or something. Crop that sheet out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 If no one rates your card it means they don't want to rate it. Now onto your card. The effect is cheap. Allowing you to draw when it kills a non-DARK monster is cheap and the effects that it gets for each DARK effect monster in the graveyard is real cheap especially due to the gigantic amount of monsters that are DARK and that also have really useful effects like Jinzo and Dark Ruler Ha Des just to list a few. Even with the last 2 effects this card is probably unlikely to go to the graveyard unless your opponent can manage to kill it with anything they have. The OCG is mediocre. Overall' date=' fix your OCG, make the effect more balanced because all the player that is going to use this card has to do is build a deck with loads of DARK monsters (like I mentioned before some DARK monsters have real good effects) and they're pretty much set for using this card, and get a better picture for this card; a head and neck shot of a dragon for a picture looks pretty bad. 6/10[/quote']This the effect is more powerful than the original. also, with the darkness counter bit. it might be a bit difficult to keep track of the cards that have a counter on them. some people run multiple copies of cards. also, by returning them to the deck, is broken. this lets you re-use powerful spells/traps and monsters that have been destroyed. if you run a deck built on drawing, you could return many cards while your opponent returns very few. but, you get access to all your cards again. and thats cheap.the "effect stealing" part of the effect is broken. just broken. its similar "Phantom of Chaos", but on roids. its just broken.the picture is hardly a dark judgment dragon, i would of accepted an inverted JD image but the pic you got there is just meh..i can correct your ocg but first balance the effect and take some parts out.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Okayyyyy, let's work on this. First of all, you can't put counters on cards unless they're on the field. That throws off your entire strategy. Second of all, you can't make an effect that relies so much on destroying non-DARK monsters... it'll kill Lightsworn Decks and be useless against Blackwing Decks.. Then it gains the effects of ALL effect monsters in your Graveyard (btw, "Continuous Effect Monster" is not a type of monster. You'll need to reword that.), which is insane. This makes it overpowered. After that, it has some limiting effects which "balance" it out, but still make it overpowered. So it's TERRIBLE to play, but it's overpowered. Congrats, you've succeeded in reaching noob status!------------------- FIX ------------------------ First of all, "Judgment Dragon" doesn't have these many effects, and "Dark Judgment Dragon" is supposed to be his mirror image (meaning HE shouldn't have many effects either). So give him a summoning requirement (4 DARK monsters in your Graveyard), and then a field-nuking effect ("... pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all other cards on the field.") with a disadvantage ("If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack until your End Phase."). Finally, have a mill requirement, like "Judgment Dragon", a discard requirement (2 cards is good), or a LP cost (1200-1600 or something). And if you can't pay the cost, "Dark Judgment Dragon" is destroyed. Don't give up on this card, it's got promise. Plus DJD is an awesome acronym for it.. :D Warm Regards,:mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 No offence, but you honestly don't want my rating. And thanks for bring back this idea to my memory. I've had this pic stored for a Judgement Dragon card and I just remembered I had it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Follow this link to get some advice on how to make it. All dark versions of already existing cards are sort of like those. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 ...I just lost the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 stronger than the original Judgment Dragon and don't return them to the deck, that just makes it WAY too powerful you'll just keep re-using the spells/traps you used before, and this is going to be a killer if your deck is built on draw power 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 LOL PIC doesn't seems a dark jud. :(5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Whats wrong with pic? The Effect Is SO Op'ed and its Terrible. I would not use this card if it was real. It contains OCG Errors and From what the Previous Review say, i Agree with them. You need to work to balance out the Effects. 3/10 for Now until its balanced and updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkest Hour Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 The cards in this thread AREN'T SUPPOSED TO BE BROKEN, NOMATTER HOW HARD THEY ARE TO SUMMON OR HOW DOUBLE-EDGED THEY ARE. Horrible idea to begin with. Too many one turn kills and it's a stupid concept. 0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 The cards in this thread AREN'T SUPPOSED TO BE BROKEN' date=' NOMATTER HOW HARD THEY ARE TO SUMMON OR HOW DOUBLE-EDGED THEY ARE. Horrible idea to begin with. Too many one turn kills and it's a stupid concept. 0/10.[/quote'] So true, this section is for realistic, not broken cards, try AoC next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 So true' date=' this section is for realistic, not broken cards, try AoC next time.[/quote'] "Broken" is a static term, as it is an opinion. That is what fixes are for, here. So the general viewpoint of it can become "not broken". However, if the user WANTS the card to be broken, then AoC is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 So true' date=' this section is for realistic, not broken cards, try AoC next time.[/quote'] "Broken" is a static term, as it is an opinion. That is what fixes are for, here. So the general viewpoint of it can become "not broken". However, if the user WANTS the card to be broken, then AoC is better. I was implying that knowingly broken cards do not belong here. I am aware of the meaning of broken, playing this card game since before the english cards were even made has given me quite alot of knowledge, and not to mention my surprisingly long amount of time card creating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Card is broken and pic is bad. nuff' said. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 did anyone of you even read the second card? Its not a double post...EDUT: ok i deleted the first card entirely here's the new one' date=' since none of you noticed the second card... Effect Monsters are Monster Cards with an orange color border. Similar to Normal Monsters, these monsters have an effect, which is demonstrated clearly by the fact that they have the Type 'Effect' beside their regular sub-type (Reptile, Spellcaster, etc.). Effects vary greatly, and are classed in five different types: * Continuous * Ignition * Trigger * Flip * Quick[/quote'] At which point did folks not know what an effect monster is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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