usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Death TributeWhile this card is face-up on the field, you can Special Summon Level 5 or higher monsters from your hand by paying 800 Life Points for each Level above 4. During your Main Phase, you must Summon at least 1 monster, if you cannot, destroy 1 monster you control. Pros: Easier for summoning high LV monster.Perfect for rush-play duelist.Perfect for Life Point-stack and high LV monster Deck. Cons: Masochist (inflict damage for each and every high LV summoning).Double Edge Card(there's a possibility that this card hurt you more than your opponent).Uber/Imba (there's no way this card will be printed). Rating: HP Doom = 9/10=^.^= = 8/102Dual = 5,5/10Dmaker = 7/10DHPlasma = 6/10Oleon4 = 6/10ragnarok1945 = 8,2/10Stealthumbreon = 7,1/10Other = ? Average Rating: 7,1/10 [NOW] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 OCG is very bad. Maybe with more effort it could be better. I like the Idea, but in don't think that the name and the pic fit to the effect. Overall, 7/10 for the nice presentation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 wow 3000 lp's for a lvl 7 Oo , well tributing 2 monsters is betr for meh :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Advice taken. Pic has changed. About the OCG, can you pointed out the error? I'm suck at grammar btw... :( wow 3000 lp's for a lvl 7 Oo ' date=' well tributing 2 monsters is betr for meh :/[/quote'] If i decrease the cost,-say: 700 for lv 5, 1400 for lv 6, 2100 for lv 7, etc- this card will become more uber/imba! And this card will be abused by the player/duelist! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 As long as this card remains on the field, both players can Special Summon LV 5 or higher monster card from their hands by paying 1000 Life Points for each Level above 4.Not sure about the las part with above. Pic is better now so 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Thanks HP Doom! :D OCG fixed! Btw, this is NOT a field spell, it is a continuous spell for the owner. So opponent player is not affected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Its like a Mosilum of the Emperor but only for you not original sorry6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 i tried to fix OCG: "Both players can Normal Summon or Set Level 5 or higher monsters without Tribute(s) by paying 1000 Life Points for each Level above 4. not a fan of the pic and the name. the effect reminds a bit of mausoleum of the emperor, but that one is better imo so 5.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 You mean "Mausoleum of the Emperor" right? I search at yugioh.wikia.com and you're right! Mausoleum of the Emperor is a field spell and have same effect with this card. I don't know there's already card with this effect in real yugioh. :( I will change the effect if i have other new idea. i tried to fix OCG: "Both players can Normal Summon or Set Level 5 or higher monsters without Tribute(s) by paying 1000 Life Points for each Level above 4. This card able to Special Summon not Normal Summon. There's a thin different between those 2 because there is a REAL card effect that affect only the Special Summoned monster(s). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Mausoleum of the Emperor does it better. This is just...meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 pic ok, effect is ok, OCG is bad.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 i tried to fix OCG: "Both players can Normal Summon or Set Level 5 or higher monsters without Tribute(s) by paying 1000 Life Points for each Level above 4. This card able to Special Summon not Normal Summon. There's a thin different between those 2 because there is a REAL card effect that affect only the Special Summoned monster(s).well i know the difference between normal and special summon, i just misunderstood while reading its effect. well now that you make me notice that, it's no more THAT similiar to Mausoleum, your card allows special summons by paying LPs, so you can still normal summon in the normal way during the same turn you use this. so i guess it might not be that useless, even if it's not that original, i'll change my rate to 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Mausoleum of the Emperor has not the same effect, because the monsters are Tribute Summoned. Here, the monsters are special summoned, means that this effect can be used to summon max. 5 monsters if you have enough Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 I think this is UP :(Change to 500 for each more level.But that way it will be OP:(6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Minor effect changes: Death TributeAs long as this card remains on the field, the owner of this card can Special Summon LV 5 or higher monster card from their hands by paying 800 Life Points for each Level above 4. In every Main Phase owner must summon a monster. If he/she couldn't, discard 1 monster card on the field into the Graveyard. The card owner must think extra to put his/her monster card on the field because the limitation of monster slot and this card penalty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 OCG needs correcting, picture a little too lifelike.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 OCG needs correcting' date=' picture a little too lifelike.6/10.[/quote'] The skeleton pic is real, but the "person" and the background is painted. Oil paint imo (i think).A bit 2,5D i suppose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 well, i dont like 'the owner of this card' that much and the added part needs fixing."While this card is face-up on the field, you can Special Summon Level 5 or higher mosnters from your hand by paying 800 Life Points for each Level above 4. During your Main Phase, you must Summon at least 1 monster, if you cannot, destroy 1 monster you control"you're emproving the card, maybe find a new pic aswell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 With the new effect, i'll give you 9/10. The OCG correction of 2Dual is very good, i would use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 As long as this card remains on the field, the owner of this card can Special Summon LV 5 or higher monster card from their hands by paying 800 Life Points for each Level above 4. During your Main Phase the owner of this card must Summon a monster. If you cannot, destroy one monster you control. I think thats better i still think that its Un Original Sorry but cuz of the whole new mebeber thing you will be able to work on it i had this problem too so ill change mine to a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 For 2Dual,I really like your OCG! Much shorter & simpler!About the owner thing, most people thought this card is field card. But this card is a Continuous Spell and only effect the player that own it, NOT both player. So i put the owner thingy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Then just use mine lol or whatever if you need help on your OCG im kinda good at it just PM me and ill help you if you want i mean theres better uses out there but none that offer help so you just need to improve your OCG and what not Good Luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 I think thats better i still think that its Un Original Sorry but cuz of the whole new mebeber thing you will be able to work on it i had this problem too so ill change mine to a 8/10 Don't worry! About the unoriginal thing, i'm honestly doesn't know there are other card with the same effect. Yugioh cards IS MANY, you don't expect me to know and remember of ALL the cards effect right? I doing this card making thing is because i love yugioh card play style. A simpler card play, but hard to master. Yugioh IS better than any TCGs that force us to collect bezillion cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 ya your right just alot of people know this game very well so if you get your own Ideas youll be apritiated more lol And if you want PM we should make a set together so you can get better at OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 I think i wouldn't make a set because my OCG is still suck. My OCG is suck because i hate grammar :evil: (alot). You know like, present tense, past perfect tense, and other complicated rules about when to speak, spoke and spoken thingy. Is just all to confusing for meh... :?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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