wero-vasto Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 [spoiler=[b]A little story[/b]]When the world though that it was the end for Evil forces, they were wrong. A new kind of Evil forces has been realesed and a tag tournament had begun. This Evil forces have taken controll over 2 brothers known as the incarnation of the Equal Brothers, an antique tag team which use basically a specialo kind of monster that they call, "Mirror". [spoiler=Monster Cards] [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]1 Fiend-type Tuner monster + 1 or more Warrior-type non-tuner monsters.This card is also treated as a Fiend-type monster. The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the combined ATK and DEF of the monsters used for the Synchro Summon. If the attack of this card is 2500 or more by this effect it cannot declare attack. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select another attack target. Each time this monsnter destroy a monster by battle, the original ATK and DEF of this card becomes the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card is also treated as a Fiend-type monster. The original ATK and DEF of this card, is equal to the number of cards in your hand x300. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, the original ATK and DEF of this card becomes the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage calculations is applied normally). The original ATK and DEF of this monster is equal tho the ATK and DEF of the tributted monster x2. Each time this card destroy a level 4 or lower monster by battle, this card original ATK and DEF becomes the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster x2. Each time this card destroy a level 5 or higher monster, this card original ATK and DEF are equal to the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. If this card attacks is lower than 2000, destroy this card and take damage from halve ATK of this monster. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster. Once per turn, you can remove from play a face-up monster on the field. The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the ATK and DEF of the removed from play monster. If the attack of this card is 2000 or more by this effect it cannot declare attack. When this card battles with your opponent's monster, after damage calculation you can remove from play the opponent's monster and this card. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card is also treated as a Fairy-Type monster. While this card is face up on the field, all battle damage you take from a battle involving a "Mirror" monster is 0. When this card is sucesfuly summoned, discard any number of "Mirror" monster from your hand. This card original attack is equal to the number of cards discard from your hand by this effect. Each time this card destroys an opponent monster by battle, this card original ATK and DEF become the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by removing from play 2 Fiend-type monster in your Graveyard and 1 Warrior-type monster from your side of the field. This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage calculations is applied normally). Once per turn, you can remove from play one face-up monster on the field. The ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the ATK and DEF of the removed monster until the end phase of your opponent's next turn. While this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent must attack with each of his/her monsters. If an opponent's monster declares attack , you may select the attack target of your opponent's monster. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) When this card is Summoned, select 1 face-up monster on the field. This card's ATK and DEF become equal to the selected monster's. When this card destroys a monster by battle, this card's ATK and DEF become equal to the destroyed monster's. When this card attacks, you can switch the battle position of the targeted monster. (Flip Effects are not activated.) [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Broken Mirror". This card is also treated as a Fairy-Type monster. This card original ATK and DEF is equal to the number of "Mirror" monsters in your Graveyard x400. Each time this card destroy a monster by battle, the ATK and DEF of this card become the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. If this card ATK is 1000 or lower, it cannot be destroy by battle and can attack your opponent's life points directly. If this card ATK is 2000 or lower, it cannot be destroy by battle. If this card ATK is 4000 or higher, all the damage that your opponent takes from a battle that involves this card is halve. Once per turn, if this card is in your Graveyard you can remove 4 monsters from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card. If this card is Special Summoned this way it is destroyed at the end of your opponent next turn. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Broken Mirror". This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type monster. When this card is summoned, select a face-up opponent monster and destroy it. This card ATK and DEF becomes equal to the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. Each time this card destroy a monster by battle, the ATK and DEF of this card become the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. If this card ATK is 1000 or lower, it cannot be destroy by battle and doubles it's ATK. If this card ATK is 2000 or lower, it cannot be destroy by battle. If this card ATK is 4000 or higher, this card cannot declare attack. Once per turn, you can Special Summon a "Mirror" monster from your graveyard. The monster summoned by this effect cannot be destroyed by battle and cannot declare attack. The monster summoned by this effect returns to the owner's hand at the end of your opponent's next turn. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play any number of "Mirror" monster from your graveyard (Max. 5). This card atributte and type are also treated as LIGHT and Fairy-type monster. This card attacks as many times as number of monsters you removed for summoning. If this card attacks directly, instead you can only attack once. This card ATK and DEF are equal to the halve of the combined ATK and DEF of your "Mirror" monsters that are currently removed from play. All the battle damage this card inflcts to your opponent's is 0. Each time this card declares an attack, select a face-up monster on the field (if this is not the only face-up monster on the field you cannot select it), and inflict damage equal to the selected monster ATK or DEF to your opponent's Life Points. Each time this card, destroy a monster by battle this card ATK and DEF become the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. When this card is destroyed, you can pay halve of your life points to Special Summon this monster on your side of the field. If this monster is summoned by this effect, it's ATK and DEF become 2800 and all the other effects are negated. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dark Reflection". This card is also treated as Dragon-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, select a monster on your opponent's Graveyard. This card original ATK and DEF are equal to the selected monster ATK and DEF. Each time this card destroy's a monster by battle, this card original ATK and DEF becomes the ATK and DEF of the destroyed monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects:• Reduce this card ATK to 0. Inflict damage to your opponent life points equal to the number of your "Mirror" monsters removed from play x300.• Reduce this card DEF to 0. Increase your life points equal to the number of your "Mirror" monsters removed from play x300.• You can only activate this effect if this card ATK and DEF is 0. Select a monster on your opponent Graveyard. This card original ATK and DEF are equal to the ATK and DEF of the selected monster.When this card is destroyed, you can remove it from play to Special Summon as many "Mirror" monsters that are removed from play to your side of the field. [spoiler=Spell Cards] [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]Each time a "Mirror" monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, put a Mirror Counter on this card (Max. 10). While this card have 5 or more Mirror Counters, "Mirror" monsters are unnafected by your opponent's Spell, Trap and Monster Cards. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by an effect, you can remove 2 Mirror Counters to prevent it. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]You can only activate this card if you control no monster and have 6 or more "Mirror" monster in your graveyard. Pay 1000 LP and Special Summon a "Baron of Luxor" from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. The monster summoned by this effect is unaffected by your opponent's Spell, Trap and Monster Cards and cannot declare attack until the 2nd turn after activation of this card. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]Select a level 4 or lower "Mirror" monster from your Deck and Special Summon it on your side of the field. Then select a "Mirror" monster from your Graveyard and return it to your Deck. You cannot declare attack this turn. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]Remove from play all "Mirror" monster on your Field, Hand and Graveyard. Special Summon a "Dogma - The Best of Illusions" from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. This card activation or effect cannot be negated. [spoiler=Trap Cards] [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]You can only activate this card if a "Baron of Luxor" or a "Lady Kunoichi - Kurenai" is destroyed and sent to the graveyard this turn while you have 5 or more "Mirror" monsters on your Graveyard. If the destroyed monster was a "Baron of Luxor" Special Summon a "Demon of the Broken Mirror - Mirage" from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard to your side of the field. If the destroyed monster was a "Lady Kunoichi - Kureani" Special Summon a "Warrior of the Broken Mirror - Miroir" fron your Hand, Deck or Graveyard to your side of the field. [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card can only be activated if you have 5 or more "Mirror" monsters removed from play and an "Asuka - The Mother of Illusion" on your side of the field. Pay halve of your life points and activate one of the following effects:• Select an " Asuka - The Mother of Illusion" that have been summoned by it's own effect and have it's effects negated. It have all it's effect.•Special Summon as many of your removed from play monsters, their cannot attack this turn.•Special Summon a "Warrior of the Broken Mirror - Miroir" or a "Demon of the Broken Mirror - Mirage" from your Hand or Graveyard ignoring their summon conditions. 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Tokyo Duel Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Love that card!!!!10/10You should make a set of Mirror Archtypes :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Love that card!!!!10/10You should make a set of Mirror Archtypes :) Thanks! Well you should check my others cards like this: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-169806.htmland this other:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-169923.html they have similar effect like this one.Maybe, i'll make the set :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 :DCan you also rate mine? I lack comments...and I'm still waiting for some one to give me a freaking bg for a card....>_> Anyways, yeah...I have 9 cards thus far...Wicked Desert Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 I'll be gald to do that.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Thanks :DBut keep at it! You have amazing talent for rookie card maker...no offence ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 given its atk determining ability, lv6 is too low for this card. This can easily go up to 4500 atk or more, which makes it over OPed You should set a max atk limit this card can have via that effect, like 3000ish ( in which case it should be lv8 ) Yes you did say 2500 atk or more it can't atk, but there's always a way around that 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 given its atk determining ability' date=' lv6 is too low for this card. This can easily go up to 4500 atk or more, which makes it over OPed You should set a max atk limit this card can have via that effect, like 3000ish (in which case it should be lv8) Yes you did say 2500 atk or more it can't atk, but there's always a way around that 9/10[/quote'] yes i know but, let's think about it, this is a Synchro monster so it need to get exactly the level of the monster right? so if we know that the tuners monster mostly are level 3, 2 and 1; the other monster level must be 3, 4 or 5. So many of this monster don't have high attack so i think that this monster won't be always over the 3000 that's why i only get that drawback and that level.Thanks for the comment, i will thinking about change it, maybe.new card updatedupdated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 any other comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 Yay! The sets begin :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Mirror Swordswoman is much more balanced out Personally I find it still a bit bland, but whatever I'll raise it 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Mirror Swordswoman is much more balanced out Personally I find it still a bit bland' date=' but whatever I'll raise it 9.1/10[/quote'] well i find it a little bland too, but i cannot imagine something more to put without making it OPed. Thanks for your comments ragnarok you're one of my favorites :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 updated 3 new cards, hope you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 any other comment?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Mirror Knight Lady looks nowhere near that of a fiend monster Atk determining ability is no different than that of Great Maju Garzett (I think that was the card) it still needs some sort of a drawback to it Mirrage Illusion (you misspelled Mirage in the card name), the last sentence should be Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by an effect, you can remove 2 Mirror Counters to negate the effect. 8/10 (some of the pics I once looked at a lot so Lovely Lady could help me create my fairy cards) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 Mirror Knight Lady looks nowhere near that of a fiend monster Atk determining ability is no different than that of Great Maju Garzett (I think that was the card) it still needs some sort of a drawback to it Mirrage Illusion (you misspelled Mirage in the card name)' date=' the last sentence should be Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by an effect, you can remove 2 Mirror Counters to negate the effect. [/quote'] OMG! i didn't notice about the Mirage Ilusion xD sorry i will change it later and it's effect too. Yes i know Mirror Knight Lady doesn't even look like a fiend but basicaly all the set is like that warriors and fiends, yes it's effect is like the Great Maju Garzet so i didn't write a drawback cause it's ATK and DEF will be changing continously. Thanks for the comment and what kind of drawback do you suggest for the Mirror Knight Lady? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 I'd give a drawback of maybe something like if this card's atk ever drops below the 2000 mark, it's removed from the game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 well, something like this? "If this card attacks is lower than 2000, destroy this card and take damage from halve ATK of this monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 that could work out as well, you going to change it to that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 well, yes , but do i make it a drawback for all the effects? or just for the first one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 no there's no need for that many I said A drawback, as in one drawback OVERALL, not per effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 so i'll make it a drawback overall. thanks i'll gonna change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 no problem Just keep this in mind. If I say for you to add a drawback, always assume that means overall unless I specifically say otherwise, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2009 ok mon amie, i have change it merci bocu ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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