wero-vasto Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Just leaving a little apart my "Mirror Set", i make this cards cause i love the picture. As always, many comments, OCG corrections, etc. :D [spoiler=[size=large]Lore:[/size]] 1 DARK tuner monster + 1 or more DARK non-tuner monster.When this card is summoned, remove from play any number of monster cards in your Graveyard(Max. 6). This card ATK is equal to the number of your monsters removed from play by this effect x600. This card attacks as many times as number of monsters you removed by it's own effect. If this card attack a monster first, it cannot attack your opponent's life points directly. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed you can remove the same number of monsters that you remove when you summon it, to prevent it's destruction. When this card is destroyed you can remove it instead to return all cards that are removed from play to their owner's deck and shuffle it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 interesting. You get a max of 3600 atk, it's destroyed you get the 6 removed monsters back That'll get an 8/10 on my part Though I don't get what you meant by This card attack for each monster removed by it's own effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Well, that's my own mistake jeje i mean, it can attack as many time as the numbers of monster removed by it's own effect, i'm actually going to change it later and to put that if it attack a monster it cannot attack directly :D that's what i mean sorry my own mistake :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Ok if that's true, then you should also add the drawback if you use that effect, you can't attack your opponent directly that turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Yes that's qhat i'm going to do thanks! :Di changed it! :D Any toher comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 ok since you changed it I'll raise my rate to 8.8/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 thanks rag!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Thats actually pretty freakn awesome. Love the picLove the effectLove the OGLove the flow and ease to put it into decks like DAD.Love the Balance-ness (spelling fail? xD) ie) lvl 10. So yeah, 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Thats actually pretty freakn awesome. Love the picLove the effectLove the OGLove the flow and ease to put it into decks like DAD.Love the Balance-ness (spelling fail? xD) ie) lvl 10. So yeah' date=' 9.5/10[/quote'] Thanks ! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 I've noticed one thing. "...would be destroyed you can remove the same number of monsters that you remove..." 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 I've noticed one thing. "...would be destroyed you can remove the same number of monsters that you remove..." 8.9/10 Thanks :D i've changed it (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 3rd BUMP :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.O.O.P. Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 cool set 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Misleading Fortune Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 The only negative comment I have about the card is that if this monster is able to get to your opponent's Life Points then you can end the duel almost instantaneously. Because if you remove 6 monsters and can attack your opponent directly with 3600 6 times its a little overkill. Or at least thats how im reading the lore. I do understand you cant attack directly if it attacks a monster 1st but if your opponent's side of the field is empty or you are able to clear it with something else you get an insta win. So maybe limit direct attacks with this card to once maybe twice at most. But otherwise awesome card! Love the picture and the idea behind it! Definitely a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 hi there can i get that image or link....ill copyright you the effect is fine as well 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 The only negative comment I have about the card is that if this monster is able to get to your opponent's Life Points then you can end the duel almost instantaneously. Because if you remove 6 monsters and can attack your opponent directly with 3600 6 times its a little overkill. Or at least thats how im reading the lore. I do understand you cant attack directly if it attacks a monster 1st but if your opponent's side of the field is empty or you are able to clear it with something else you get an insta win. So maybe limit direct attacks with this card to once maybe twice at most. But otherwise awesome card! Love the picture and the idea behind it! Definitely a 9/10 Yes you can, but it's a Synchro so it have a little something of OPed. :D Thanks for your comment :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archie17 Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 everything is good except this part: "This card attacks as many times as number of monsters you removed by it's own effect." Omit this, and you got a very balanced card. Otherwise its overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 I like the way this works, except for the bit where she's an instant kill by herself. It's neat how the stronger you make her, the more you have to pay for the protection effect, so it takes some strategy to determine what tradeoff is worth it. If you want to balance this, make it so it can only be Synchro Summoned, and the instant kill doesn't seem so bad (hey, it worked for Trident Dragion.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 It's like a Chimeratech Overdragon, but maybe if i add that it can only at once directly, would that help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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touzaikokon Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Well, this is a nice effect, and looks complicated, although I'd say it's relatively simple. I'd try to clean up my OCG a bit, but it's not that bad. Clever idea, I like it a lot. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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