My New Card

[I like Girls]

Im new so please don't make Harsh Comments

Effect

This card is unaffected of Trap Cards. Once per turn, if your opponent has 5 or more cards in his/her hand, you can Special Summon a Level 2 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard. If your opponent selected this card as an attack target, you can pay 800 Life Points and Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to negate the attack. Once per turn you can pay 500 Life Points to increase this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase of this turn. If this card attacks a monster, you can place 1 "Soul Counter" on the attacked monster. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to place 2 "Soul Counters" on 1 of your opponent's monster. Each time your opponent destroys a monster you control, place 1 "Soul Counter" on this card. You can pay 800 Life Points to decrease the ATK of all monsters on the field x300 for every "Soul Counter" placed on them. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove 3 "Soul Counters" from your opponent's monster to keep this monster on the field (damage calculation is applied normally). You can remove 3 "Soul Counters" from the field to roll a six-sided die. If the result is 1: Pay 500 Life Points. If the result is 2 : Special Summon a DARK monster from your Graveyard. If the Result is 3 : Flip a Coin. If the result is Heads : Gain 1000 Life Points, If the result is Tails : Your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. If the result is 4 : Destroy all cards on the field except this card. If the result is 5 : Remove from play all Trap Cards in your deck. If the results is 6 : Increase the ATK of this card by 1000.

[Sorrow.]

As Lovely Lady Says: Do not post a card if you are not prepared for it to be critizied.

But I don't need to be mean.

OCG Errors, A little under powered though because It sorts of forces you to use your Life Points, this isn't Pokemon or D&D silly they dont do coin fliping or Dice Tossing.

7/10

Are you happy???

[I like Girls]

As Lovely Lady Says: Do not post a card if you are not prepared for it to be critizied.

But I don't need to be mean.

OCG Errors' date=' balanced though but it kepts stealing your Life Points, this isn't Pokemon or D&D silly they dont do coin fliping or Dice Tossing.

5/10

The highest I give New Members is 6/10 just to let you know.

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Which means your a n00b

Cos I see people giving great comments cos there a Legendary

And bad ones cos there new

[RAEGING D0GKING]

As Lovely Lady Says: Do not post a card if you are not prepared for it to be critizied.

But I don't need to be mean.

OCG Errors' date=' balanced though but it kepts stealing your Life Points, this isn't Pokemon or D&D silly they dont do coin fliping or Dice Tossing.

5/10

The highest I give New Members is 6/10 just to let you know.

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loln00brating

 

Nice Card

some OCG mistakes 9/10

[Läufer]

Impressive. Very huge, creative effects.

 

Btw, OCG fix:

This card is unaffected of Trap Cards. Once per turn, if your opponent has 5 or more cards in his/her hand, you can Special Summon a Level 2 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard. If your opponent selected this card as an attack target, you can pay 800 Life Points and Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to negate the attack. Once per turn you can pay 500 Life Points to increase this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase of this turn. If this card attacks a monster, you can place 1 "Soul Counter" on the attacked monster. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to place 2 "Soul Counters" on 1 of your opponent's monster. Each time your opponent destroys a monster you control, place 1 "Soul Counter" on this card. You can pay 800 Life Points to decrease the ATK of all monsters on the field x300 for every "Soul Counter" placed on them. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove 3 "Soul Counters" from your opponent's monster to keep this monster on the field (damage calculation is applied normally). You can remove 3 "Soul Counters" from the field to roll a six-sided die. If the result is 1: Pay 500 Life Points. If the result is 2 : Special Summon a DARK monster from your Graveyard. If the Result is 3 : Flip a Coin. If the result is Heads : Gain 1000 Life Points, If the result is Tails : Your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. If the result is 4 : Destroy all cards on the field except this card. If the result is 5 : Remove from play all Trap Cards in your deck. If the results is 6 : Increase the ATK of this card by 1000.

 

Kinda OVP'd tho. 7/10

[I like Girls]

Do not call me a N00b the effect does have OCG errors' date=' Do not post a card if you are not prepared for it to be critized, there for you are not prepared, the times when I give them something high is when they make a dozen good cards that make sense.

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I am Prepared and I know what im saying

You know stars and posts don't matter

[Läufer]

Do not call me a N00b the effect does have OCG errors' date=' Do not post a card if you are not prepared for it to be critized, there for you are not prepared, the times when I give them something high is when they make a dozen good cards that make sense.

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I am Prepared and I know what im saying

You know stars and posts don't matter

 

That is true. Even if you have 1 star and haven't post much, but you make very impressive cards, that's what a future Lagendary Cardmaker would be.

[I like Girls]

Do not call me a N00b the effect does have OCG errors' date=' Do not post a card if you are not prepared for it to be critized, there for you are not prepared, the times when I give them something high is when they make a dozen good cards that make sense.

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I am Prepared and I know what im saying

You know stars and posts don't matter

 

That is true. Even if you have 1 star and haven't post much, but you make very impressive cards, that's what a future Lagendary Cardmaker would be.

Thanks

Another +1 rep

[J-Max]

I understand that you are new but a Effect that reads like a Chapter in a story is not good... You need to keep the effect medium sized and balanced.

[I like Girls]

I tried to go for a ling effect card

[Koshej]

I Like Girls

Very cool card, except for the Effect's length.

 

this isn't Pokemon or D&D silly they dont do coin fliping or Dice Tossing

Coin Toss

Die Roll

Speaking of NOOBS and IDIOTS...

Coin flips and die rolls are a part of YGO!!!

We could argue on OCG - but THAT sentence is just sooo noobish... :(

[Canadian]

Omg its not a card its a NOVEL!!!!

Who knew... >___>

 

But srsly, a card that makes me bust out my dice AND my coins?!!?!

 

lol, I don't like cards with huge effects like this, I bet you could make 3-4 cards just from this effect by splitting it up.

 

And IMO I'm not a fan of the picture.

 

5/10

[ragnarok1945]

that is one REALLY long effect there

 

a dice and coin effect, you don't see much cards with both these days

 

along with the counter effect, this could be better if you split it into 2 cards instead of one

 

7/10

[Lord Smeagle]

Effect is all over the place. It almost looks like you purposely tried to make the effect as long as possible, and it's really not very coherent. OCG/spelling errors throughout.

 

5/10.

[Rehva]

Kinda Op'ed Ok for a beginner ^.^

 

8/10

[☨Genocide ☨]

phew, finally finished reading all that. OCG error is that you have a;; instead of all. I was afraid that a flame war might start here. Agreed woth above, I can't even come close to make it out on the card, and since this is the realistic card section, thats not good. A card is no good if you don't know what it does. 8/10

[Aonon]

indeed, it would be better as two cards instead of one. just looking at the effect length made me almost not want to read it. 5.5/10

[Spell Master]

It's not bad but like everyone is saying, the effect is too long. Not bad though, you don't see very many cards with both a coin effect AND a dice effect. One other thing, you may want to concider changing it's type into a psychic because of all the life point costs and stuff.

 

7.99/10

[P.O.O.P.]

normally i would say it is okay, but (not to be "paula abdul-y") you poured your freaking heart into this. however, i must say you need some MAJOR OCG fixes. meh. I don't feel a 4, but this is better than a 3.

 

3.9/5

great for a newb.

[kliffi]

Whew, just finished reading it, and now I need to take a breather.

 

I see 3 distinct card effects here. lol Might wanna work that out.

 

Gotta work on OCG.

 

(You made my day)

 

6/10

[Sweet Lightning]

This isn't Pokemon or D&D silly they dont do coin fliping or Dice Tossing.

5/10

The highest I give New Members is 6/10 just to let you know.

 

Putting restrictions on your ratings for newbies? How...silly.

 

Anyways, no dice tossing or coin flipping? What about Arcana Force and Graceful/Skull Dice?

 

On to the card. The effect took me an hour to read. XD JK. But seriously, it looks like you tried to cram too many good ideas into one card. :) There are OCG fixes mentioned above. Pic is okay. 6/10 Keep it up and shorten the effect! :)

[Sorrow.]

Woah I'm sorry if the dice and coin filp is an effect I didn't know, sorry...

[I like Girls]

Thanks for the rates

Also OCG being fixed

[Sorrow.]

I like Girls I apologize for giving you a low ratting...... Please everyone I was wrong I shouldn't have vote New Members horribly, yes you can say I am kissing up just because I don't want to make any enemys on this Forum.... I have been down that road too many times

New rating

7/10

[I like Girls]

Thanks for the rate