Enma Kozato Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 ok so I thought of making new kinds of cards, cards with un thought of effects behold what ive done so farCrdit for pic goes to DMG=3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Hm... first one has a bit of a simple effect. The last two pics are blurry. OCG could use improving. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robee Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 hmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 new monster added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Not sure your secret striker is a mchine-type monster but the pic is a little blurry to be fair. Omega sniper is blurry too, I dont really like the double or nothings pic either..have you tried looking for pics on a website called Deviant Art it's a great place or images, you should have a butchers if you haven't already. If Double or Nothing is activated during your opponent's Battle Phase doesnt it have to be a Quick-Play Spell card?? Omega Knight: During your Standby Phase you can increase the ATK points of this card equal to the number of cards in your hand x100 until the End Phase of the turn.Omega Striker: Once per turn when you opponent selects this card as attack target you can pay 800 Life Points to negate the attack, then you can attack 1 of your opponent's monsters during the same Battle Phase.Omega Sniper: While this card is in Defence Position you can inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK points of this card.8/10 good ideas and nice effects just the pics really but all in all a good job 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 i only use deviant art and i had to use a mech pic for striker but then i found this one and mustve forgotten to change them although i couldnt seem to find a good coin toss pic now about the OCG im just not sure with these effects i mean im pretty sure these effects are original so OCG is hardbut thank you for all your suggestions and help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 I didnt mean the OCG edits as an insult just thought it may help you in future when you write the next cards, the ideas are different so OCG is difficult and Im not saying my rewrite is bullet proof at all. If you feel yours is best ignore mine its only there to help you boss man. I know sometimes finding a nice pic is hardwork Im having the same problem too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 i took nothing as an insult at all but as you know card making aint easy i figured that out through a big thread o criticism got good ratings on my second set tmy infras were somewhat sucsessful (until deus came along and made his own version) and the inverts went well so i figure hey lets do something out of the ordinary so yeah I'll add a few and edit a few l873r Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 hm...the fourth one is also quite simple. Needs a lil bang.Also, how can a monster attack while face-down DEF? You should clarify that. DOes it flip face-up at the moment of ATK? If not, how can the damage be calculated? Pic is... well, get another 1. 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Pics are blurry, OCG ha a few errors that I'm to lazy to fix right now, and Secret Striker is UPed.6/10 a good effort, hopefully you'll get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 The pics are ok but the ocg is errorish. By the way how does this set help itself with the monsters. Some of their effects should be able to help other Omega monsters. At least that's what I think should happen in a set. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 ok i have edited most of the set removed double or nothing and replaced it with omega oversoul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Kozato Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Supports added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 a little bland, moderate OCG (can not say more my keyboard is jammedMy rate is8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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