Egyptians Gods

[teo2009]

My cards Gods.

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[lilmantoot]

Its a nice card but

you have some OCG errors.

8/10

[Home Slice]

cool card but there is some ocg errors

[Chaos Flame]

COOL card and SOME OCG errors!? The whole thing is an OCG error. Besides, its a double effect monster. 2/10

[Aero~]

1/10. It's in the AOC section, at least.

 

OCG fix:

 

When this card is flip summoned, once per turn, you can select one monster in your respective graveyard and return it to your hand.

 

I think he's been hanging around those stupid fake cards that say crap like, "Dinasour.Egg",

 

or "Warrior.Junta.Ceromony".

[Deustodo]

The correct OCG would be:

"FLIP: You can add 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard to your hand."

Well, yeah, its need alot of work,

2/10

[dee 1000]

you put down effect twice on the card. 6/10

[elementalherosmash]

Its a nice card but

you have some OCG errors.

8/10

Lol

cool card but there is some ocg errors

lol

 

Anyway

the whole cards is full of OCG errors

Too many stars

What is the effect

1/10

[HLG KillerNinja]

Check out my god card http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/451515/098360931.jpg

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[Free Style]

The whole card is full of errors.

 

The pic is nice though.

[EHN.]

My cards Gods.

Too many fake cards. Try looking at some REALCards

[HLG KillerNinja]

[/img] check out this god

[Guest ash_202457]

I got that Obelisk

[AbbatonStrikes]

@ teo2009 A wicked pic and a cool name to start with!! A few things 1. You dont need to type in /Effect, the card maker does that for you matey. 2. This card needs Summoning requirements like 3 Tributes or a certain Spell Card/Trap Card or monster Effect. 3. Your OCG which is Offical Card Grammer needs work, I useually dont mind if it's a little off but yours is well to be honnest bad...Here is what I think you meant:

While this card is face-up on the field during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard.

Think that sounds abit better, a good start the effect needs work and pick up on the other points I made and your all good. I can see you have talent at making cards so keep it up and youll be making killer cards in no time!!!

 

@ HLG KillerNinja, you shouldnt post in other peoples threads mate, make your own and post there. It's not fair because it pulls attention away from the original thread, Im sure you wouldnt like it if someone done it to you, would you??!

 

@ ash_202457, you spelt Duelist wrong on your sig mate, next to your pic...just thought I'd let you know.

[Free Style]

Teo, to be honest?

 

You dunno ANYTHING about YGO, seriously.

Stop with the useless threads and spam.

If you actually wanna learn a thing or 2, go play some YGO on GBA or DS.

[TheSeer]

Uh, not so good. 2/10.

[Shogun Chicken]

This is ironic. Almost everyone in YCM wants to see good cards, free from OCG errors and bad pics, yet they come here. Probably one of the worst you could choose for that factor. I know some of you guys want to get newbs on the right track, but still...

[ZhaneX]

2 of those cards use pictures of pre-existing cards.

3/10

[grassfoot]

THIS MAKES NO SENSE!!!!!!!!! WHY R THEY lvl 12?????????SOME NORMAL MONSTERS R EFFECT MONSTERS!!!!!!!!

(pants)

.....and u got effect / effect and insanely complicated and confusing partial effects.

please improve.

3/10

[xzMasteRzx]

Look man. Here, many won't like your cards becuase you don't use the right grammar that the card game uses. I'm going to ignore the OCG (Original Card Grammar) since you're a level 1. Anyway, I do get everything that the effects are trying to say and the pics are UBER AWESOMEZ!

 

Score: 9/10 (based on pics and what the effect is trying to say.)

[Aero~]

Yup. You've definatley been hanging around those RL fake cards.