wero-vasto Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Waaaa, a pretty occupied thanks to my exams u.u but i made this card on my free time :D hope you enjoy it :D [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by releasing 1 Fiend-Type monster and 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, select a monster on your opponent's field and a monster on your side of the field. While this card is face-up, the selected monsters cannot declare attack. Each time this card inflicts battle damage, discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. If the discarded card is a monster you draw 1 card, if not your opponent select a monster from his/her Graveyard and return it to the Deck. The Dek is then shuffled. If you cannot discard a card from your opponent, send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard. Image from Devianart!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 minor OCG errors, for the most part they're just grammatical errors anyway you should also have an effect as to what happens if there's no cards in your opponent's hand to discard (for the 2nd to last effect) 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 changed! and updated so... what now? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 ok now it makes it balanced out, still a little grammatical errors, so I'll raise the rate to 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Ok, rag could you tell me which grammatical errors plz? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 change removing from play to releasing select a monster on your opponent's field and a monster on your field to "and a monster on your side of the field" you can start with that, then look over the text CAREFULLY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Overcompensating. Otherwise interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Thanks! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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