New card i made

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Credit for pic goes to cmc1234

 

 

Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 'Aussa, The Earth Charmer' and 1 'Wynn, The Wind Charmer' from play from your side of the field. When this card is flip summoned into face up attack-position, take control of one face up 'Wind' monster your opponent controls.

[Yugioh42]

4/10 needs some fixes, I have made cards worse though.

[EHN.]

4/10 needs some fixes

Please be more specific

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[ragnarok1945]

it's not Wind monster, it's WIND monster (WIND is not a type, it's an attribute)

 

and you shouldn't take control of that monster permanently anyway

 

7/10

[cmc1234]

Yay you used my image!

 

thanks

 

Awsome card but ocg erros

 

8/10

[Excallibur]

Ummmmm, just a thought, but if it can't be Normal Summoned or SET, how exactly are you going to flip summon it? I'm pretty sure that Book of Moon wouldn't be wasted on this. I like it but It makes no sense.

 

5/10

[NeriesUmbra]

needs more attack and an effect that alows it to set it's self once per turn.

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Oh and I like the pik

[EHN.]

Ummmmm' date=' just a thought, but if it can't be Normal Summoned or SET, how exactly are you going to flip summon it?

 

5/10

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By special summoning it

 

 

@HLG Killerninja:

Don't post cards on my thread

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Anyone noticed THIS SPAM? I already reported him

 

ONTOPIC - Nice card and image. Here's the OCG fix:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 'Aussa, The Earth Charmer' and 1 'Wynn, The Wind Charmer' from play from your side of the field. When this card is Flip Summoned, take control of one face up WIND monster your opponent controls.

[DMZ]

Special Summon face-down?

 

My suggestion on OCG fix(Warning: No guarantees lol):

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 'Aussa, The Earth Charmer' and 1 'Wynn, The Wind Charmer' from play from your field. When this card is Flip Summoned(Can it be Flip Summoned face-down??), take control of 1 face-up WIND monster your opponent controls.

 

Other than that, 8/10

[.Nu-13]

"in attack position" isnt needed. Monsters are always Flip Summoned into attack position

[EHN.]

Yeah i guess

 

Thanks for the rates guys!!!

[darkwolf777]

3/10 Due to the fact that it permanently steals an opponent's monster, but due to the way its summoned from the hand and the fact that you will need another card to flip it face-down in order to use its effect seems rather too much to use.

 

This card already requires to Charmers on the field, which would normally be played face-down. When Charmers are played face-up, you normally want them to take control of an opponent's monster. Since Charmers need to stay on the field to keep their mind control effects, you normally wouldn't tribute them without getting rid of the charmed monsters first. IMO The summoning requirements work against the Archetype. Maybe if you removed them from the Graveyard to Removed from Play rather than them being on the field.

 

Right now, this card can only be placed face-down through Book of Moon or similar effect, or Special Summoned from the Graveyard face-down. I'm not sure if you can Special Summon a card from the hand in face-down defense position, unless it said it on the card, so maybe add "This card can only be Special Summoned in Face Down Defense Position by..." or as suggested above, give it a "Once per turn, you can flip this card into face-down Defense Position." effect.

 

Since it is Special Summoned through Wynn and Aussa, maybe add EARTH as a type it can charm as well?

 

If you plan on making a similar card requiring Hiita and Eria, maybe give this card a different Name, maybe one more fitting to the theme of Charmers. "The Forbidden Spellcaster" just seems like a name of a card set aside for.. well a very powerful Magician. Give her a cute name that fits her appearance :D "Kitsune, The Forest Charmer", since i guess Wind and Earth monsters would live in the forest i guess x.o

 

Sorry, such criticism by me is probably not needed, no need to take the above suggestions seriously.

 

 

I've used a Charmers deck once, not that it was any good >< But I was able to steal my opponent's Hamon, Lord of Striking Thunder by equipping it with Scroll of Bewitchment and stealing it with Aussa. Felt so good to win that one.

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Longest replie ever!!!

 

I'm sigging this