...my first one, what i think the fourth Egyptian God is...

[Slop Doggy]

love it or hate it, idc. i like it, and that's all i care about. >_>

 

Description below:

 

As life ends, this creature awakens. The fires of hell scorch the land as this creature stalks its prey

 

This monster can only be summoned by sacrificing "Obilisk The Tormentor", "Slifer The Sky Dragon", and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" from your side of the field. By sacrificing 1000 Life Points, you may destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field and inflict Direct Damage equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster to your opponent's Life Points. If you do this, this card may not attack this Battle Phase, and it may not activate this ability until two turns have passed. If you Tribute this card while it is face up on your side of the field, you may Special Summon one "Obelisk The Tormentor", "Slifer The Sky Dragon", and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" to your side of the field in face-up Attack position or face-down Defense position from your Deck, hand, or Graveyard. If you summon "The Winged Dragon of Ra", it receives 4000 ATK and DEF points.

[Deustodo]

Oh, boy, let me correct it for you:

First of all, Divine-Beast only have an Effect if they are Effect monster. (biggest duh)

Now for the effect correction

"Obelisk The Tormentor" + "Slifer the Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon of Ra"

This card can only be Fusion Summoned using the Fusion Material Monsters above. By paying 1000 Life Points, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent's control and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's ATK, this card cannot attack in the turn this effect is activated (This effect can only activated again after 2 turns it's activation). If you Tribute this card face-up, you can Special Summon 1 "Obelisk The Tormentor", "Slifer The Sky Dragon", or "The Winged Dragon of Ra" from your Graveyard, if you Special Summon "The Winged Dragon of Ra", it original ATK and DEF becomes 4000."

Ah, Finally, anyway, its too OP, Try to lower the ATK to 5000 (DEF as well). Also, it should be a Level 12.

7/10 for the originality. 0/10 for the balance and 3 for the OCG.

[Slop Doggy]

and now?

 

 

This monster may only be summoned by sacrificing 1 face-up "Obelisk the Tormentor", "Slifer the Sky Dragon", and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" on your side of the field. By paying 1000 Life Points, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. This card cannot attack in the turn this effect is activated (This effect can only activated again after 2 turns it's activation). If you Tribute this card face-up on your side of the field, you can Special Summon 1 "Obelisk The Tormentor", "Slifer The Sky Dragon", and/or "The Winged Dragon of Ra" from your Graveyard. If you Special Summon "The Winged Dragon of Ra" using this effect, it's original ATK and DEF becomes 4000.