wero-vasto Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Hope you enjoy it! Love it or Hate it! It doesn't matter, just don't be rude ;) SOME ERRORS? Just let me know and i change it, or if you have an idea for this card let me know too! 3 Stars Celebration[/align][align=center]3 Stars Celebration[/align][align=center] [align=center]******************************************************Angels of Light and DarknessLightLevel: 8Type: Fairy / EffectATK/? DEF/?[/align] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Level 3 or lower LIGHT Fairy-Type monster and 1 Level 7 or higher DARK Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. This card is also treated as a DARK Fiend-Type monster. The original ATK of this card is equal to the number of DARK Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard x 400. The original DEF of this card is equal to the number of LIGHT Fairy-Type monsters in your Graveyard x 400. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 LIGHT Fairy-Type monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls whose DEF is lower than the DEF of this card OR remove from play 1 DARK Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than the ATK of this card. If there are 4 or fewer LIGHT Fairy-Type or DARK Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard, you can return this face-up card to your deck to return all cards removed from play back into their owner's Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 BUMP :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 interesting to see no one has commented yet given the atk and def determining effect, it should be balanced out the same goes with the rest of the effect 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Okay, I like the concept behind this card. It would go well with the Sky Scourge monsters. The image? Love it. (Wish I could find it)You have a few OCG errors in your card. If I may: [spoiler=OCG fix (If you like)]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Level 3 or lower LIGHT Fairy-Type monster and 1 Level 7 or higher DARK Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. This card is also treated as a DARK Fiend-Type monster. The original ATK of this card is equal to the number of DARK Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard x 400. The original DEF of this card is equal to the number of LIGHT Fairy-Type monsters in your Graveyard x 400. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 LIGHT Fairy-Type monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls whose DEF is lower than the DEF of this card OR remove from play 1 DARK Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is lower than the ATK of this card. If there are 4 or fewer LIGHT Fairy-Type or DARK Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard, you can return this face-up card to your deck to return all cards removed from play back into their owner's Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. (Granted, the OCG may not be 100% accurate) Overall, I like this card a lot. It has good balance and it can help recover lost resources with its last effect. Great job, dude. I'll give this a 9/10. Keep up the good work. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Thanks! puff at least someone comment u.u i +1rep both of you (: thanks for your comments! OCG fixed ;) thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 BUMP :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 A really nic card, I love the pic.The effect is somewhat OP, becouse of its big ATK and DEF increase and the double Attack power.Original effect, I like how it combines Light and Darkness.A 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 A really nic card' date=' I love the pic.The effect is somewhat OP, becouse of its big ATK and DEF increase and the double Attack power.Original effect, I like how it combines Light and Darkness.A 8.9/10[/quote'] It have a little expecification in his summon so i though that it was balanced enough cuz if you activated one of it's effects it will reduce the ATK and DEF of the monster... Thanks for your comment and rate :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 9/10. The only problem with it is that both destructions have "once per turn", which means you can use both of them once per turn, which means you can kill 2 monsters per turn. Given the double attack, that's kinda strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 The only problem with it is that both destructions have "once per turn"' date=' which means you can use both of them once per turn, which means you can kill 2 monsters per turn. Given the double attack, that's kinda strong.[/quote'] Actually it's just 1 effect per turn, not two but i will check the OCG and change it if it says "Once per turn" in both effects. Thank for your comment and rate!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindscatter Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Ow....wait actually you're right...9.4/10 then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Ow....wait actually you're right...9.4/10 then. So i was Right! :D thanks for your comment ;) BTW BUMP :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Pretty cool picture... For a pretty cool Member. Nice effect its a little like one of my cards. Cool though,Balanced with minor OCG errors is a good start off..8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jord200 Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 hey not bad. great pick. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Pretty cool picture... For a pretty cool Member. Nice effect its a little like one of my cards. Cool though' date='Balanced with minor OCG errors is a good start off..8/10[/quote'] Thanks but could you show me the OCG errors plz? ^^ i want to make this card perfect ;) thanks for your comment and you too Jord ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 I dislike it. It has little merit... I mean, either you'll be playing a LIGHT Fairy-Type-oriented Deck or a DARK Fiend-Type Deck . Your only hope of doing anywhere near decent is following that single theme to the Grave(yard... get it?). Trying to split the Deck with low-level LIGHT Fairy-Types and high-level DARK Fiend-Types is going to fail epically ("Sky Scourge" monsters aren't used for the same reason, except they're better than this card because they don't have level requirements). So any Deck hoping to have a decent chance of summoning this card, will also have to hope and pray that their opponents draw hands of incompatible cards for all of the Duels in every Match they play... and that's NOT going to happen. So as awesome as it is, it's SO not useful. You lose 4 monsters from the Grave for a guy that'll, at most, target and destroy 1 monster that ISN'T actually a threat to him (the whole lower-stat thing)... plus if you're removing 3 LIGHT Fairy-Type mosnters from the Graveyard, then he's losing a prospective 1200 DEF... so he'll be at something like 1600... which is decent for a 4-star.... I'd change the OCG, but the card's balance and usefulness don't seem to make it worth it. Sorry for being harsh -- but this card is far from great. As a 3-star, I have no doubt you can do better than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 I dislike it. It has little merit... I mean' date=' either you'll be playing a LIGHT Fairy-Type-oriented Deck or a DARK Fiend-Type Deck . Your only hope of doing anywhere near decent is following that single theme to the Grave(yard... get it?). Trying to split the Deck with low-level LIGHT Fairy-Types and high-level DARK Fiend-Types is going to fail epically ("Sky Scourge" monsters aren't used for the same reason, except they're better than this card because they don't have level requirements). So any Deck hoping to have a decent chance of summoning this card, will also have to hope and pray that their opponents draw hands of incompatible cards for all of the Duels in every Match they play... and that's NOT going to happen. So as awesome as it is, it's SO not useful. You lose 4 monsters from the Grave for a guy that'll, at most, target and destroy 1 monster that ISN'T actually a threat to him (the whole lower-stat thing)... plus if you're removing 3 LIGHT Fairy-Type mosnters from the Graveyard, then he's losing a prospective 1200 DEF... so he'll be at something like 1600... which is decent for a 4-star.... I'd change the OCG, but the card's balance and usefulness don't seem to make it worth it. Sorry for being harsh -- but this card is far from great. As a 3-star, I have no doubt you can do better than this.[/quote'] Don't worry ;) BTW if you are telling me that if it have 1600 DEF it means that there are 4 LIGHT Fairy-Type monsters on your Grave, so you can activate it's effect and save it returning it to your deck and all the removed from play cards ^^ some rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 I thought it was great but that last guy brought up good points that I hadn't thought up how much atk and def could this card really have? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 if you have a normal deck could be 3600 ATK and 3200 DEF or vice versa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 if you have a normal deck could be 3600 ATK and 3200 DEF or vice versa this is assuming you've basically drained your Deck.... And as for that whole returning effect... well, you'd only do that if you were low on monsters in your Graveyard. Which is either when his effect has been used a lot or when you've just Summoned him and you've got about 1 LIGHT Fairy-Type monster in the Grave. Now, it's be absolutely pointless to return all those cards, because your basically pulling a "Pot of Avarice", just without the drawing (you increase your chance of getting a monster without gaining a card advantage... I call that bad.). Add that to this thought: What are the chances of you getting him out, getting around 4 LIGHT Fairy-Type or 4 DARK Fiend-Type monsters in the Graveyard, using his effect once (maybe twice) and THEN pulling the recovery effect? Null. Maybe 1%... so good luck with this card... I recommend a complete reworking of the idea. If it were something like "Chaos Sorcerer's" summoning requirements, with 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK, you could pull off a card with low stats that destroys actually threatening monsters, or a high-stat monster that destroys weak and stat-deprived monsters... you could also take the time to crop the picture so it looks like your "Angels" aren't "Dwarves" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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