jabber2033 Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Created a couple new cards. Couldn't come up with a set name, though. [spoiler=Effect]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, draw 2 cards, then remove from play 1 of the cards you drew. If you removed a Monster card, when this card attacks, you can Special Summoned the removed monster at the End Phase of this turn. Credit to Estheryu on DeviantArt And now for the support: [spoiler=Effect]If this card is used in the Synchro Summon of a LIGHT monster, you can increase its level by 1. If this card is used in the Synchro Summon of a monster other than a LIGHT monster, discard 1 card from your hand. Credit to Vas Co. Also on DeviantArt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Not bad, but please, no silver letters on synchros! A few OCG errors. The efects are pretty good. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Not bad' date=' but please, no silver letters on synchros! A few OCG errors. The efects are pretty good. 8.7/10[/quote'] Sorry about the silver letters. Didn't think it really mattered. Think you can point out errors for me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SgtExell Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Pretty good! I'm not that brillaint at OCG as i use the old style but it seems pretty stable. Balanced effects. good job 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Free Style Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Pretty good cards ya got there.But please no white letters on synchros. It's annoying. xDAnyway, I don't see any OCG errors here. The effects are good too.8.5/10 ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Not bad' date=' but please, no silver letters on synchros! A few OCG errors. The efects are pretty good. 8.7/10[/quote'] Sorry about the silver letters. Didn't think it really mattered. Think you can point out errors for me? You know, I don't think that he can. I've seen his posts, and as for today, I haven't seen him correct any OCG errors. There is one OCG error. It's supposed to be "remove from play 1 card that you drew". "Allure of Darkness" and "Dark Armed Dragon" etc. are prime examples for this. All in all, a good card. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenerationX Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Good cards. The second card pic, however is overused. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Hand = hand (last cards last word) Anyways OCG seems fine but I'm not sure about the first Synchro sentence but think its correct 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 OCG fix: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, draw 2 cards, then, remove from play 1 of the cards you drew. If you removed a Monster card, when this card attacks, you can Special Summoned the removed monster. nice anyway, 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 Good cards. The second card pic' date=' however is overused. 7/10[/quote'] I don't hang around much in this section, so I really don't know what pics are overused or not. OCG fix: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is successfully Synchro Summoned' date=' draw 2 cards, then remove from play 1 of the cards you drew. If you removed a Monster card, when this card attacks, you can Special Summoned the removed monster. nice anyway, 7.5/10[/quote'] Thanks. I'll make the fix. And thanks to everyone else who commented as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 16, 2009 Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 2nd card pic is a little overused, but that's about it the OCG errors aren't too numerous anyway, so I'll rate this 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted December 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2009 2nd card pic is a little overused' date=' but that's about it[/quote'] Like I said, I don't hang around here much, so I don't know which are overused. And over 30,000 posts?!?! Jeez... I made some of the changes suggested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hrash0 Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, draw 2 cards, then remove from play 1 of the cards you drew by this effect. If the card removed from play this way was a Monster Card, when this card attacks, you can Special Summon the removed monster during the End Phase. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a LIGHT Synchro Monster, you can upgrade it by 1 level. If this card is used in the Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster other than a LIGHT monster, discard 1 card from your hand. OCG is pretty good, except for the small things pointed out above. The cards are really well-balanced, so I give this 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted December 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is successfully Synchro Summoned' date=' draw 2 cards, then remove from play 1 of the cards [b']you drew by this effect.[/b] If the card removed from play this way was a Monster Card, when this card attacks, you can Special Summon the removed monster during the End Phase. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a LIGHT Synchro Monster, you can upgrade it by 1 level. If this card is used in the Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster other than a LIGHT monster, discard 1 card from your hand. OCG is pretty good, except for the small things pointed out above. The cards are really well-balanced, so I give this 9/10 Thanks, but I think the OCG is pretty accurate right now. In the first one, "by this effect" isn't needed. And I think "from play this way" isn't needed either, since I already specified where I remove the card from. And I think "upgrade" in yours is has the same meaning as "increase," so I'm not gonna change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ÐΛЯКЛΞSSКЛłGHТ Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 Don't like 1st Pic2nd is cool :DEffects are pretty cool9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 17, 2009 Report Share Posted December 17, 2009 2nd card pic is a little overused' date=' but that's about it[/quote'] Like I said, I don't hang around here much, so I don't know which are overused. And over 30,000 posts?!?! Jeez... I made some of the changes suggested. good, then I'll be raising the rate to 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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