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[DeathstickeR]

a pet for my Dreadnought King.

 

 

This card can only be summoned by removing from play the top 20 cards of your deck and 4 "Dreadnought" monsters in your graveyard. This card cannot attack until 2 turns after it is summoned. When this card inflicts 2000 damage or more to your opponent's life points,remove from play this card and special summon the 4 "Dreadnought" monsters you removed from play to summon this monster.You can only equip this card to "Archon-King of the Dreadnought" when you do,destroy all spells and traps on the field.

[ragnarok1945]

half your deck and 4 cards in the graveyard, then it gets removed from play the moment it inflicts high damage? That makes this more on the UPed end

 

6/10

[The Official Jerk of YCM]

at least the pic is cool dude =P

[DeathstickeR]

ok i may just change it so it can only attack every 2 turns and not make it removed form play as well as increasing teh number of cards that need to be removed form play. i figured he was powerful as hell so i wanted to make him a lil harder to get out.

[The Mad Hatter]

Yeah...

Terrible OCG,

Bad Pic,

Very UP,

0/10...

[wero-vasto]

at least the pic is cool dude =P

 

the pic isn't all!

 

UPed to me :/

 

but i get the idea, so 7/10

[JIMMYTRON]

ive used this image...but um nice try with the card...ill say 4.5/10 (being generous...sorry):

here's the link that lead to some of my popularity-

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-167497.html

[DeathstickeR]

if my OCG si sooo terrible how bout u fix the whole thing mad hatter? the pic is fawsome so to those who don't agree,suck it. and i realize it UPed that's why im gunna fix it

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new effect:This card can only be summoned by removing from play the top 10 cards of your deck and 8 lvl 4 or lower "Dreadnought" monsters in your graveyard. This card can attack once every 2 turns. When this card inflicts 1500 damage or more to your opponent's life points, special summon 4 of the "Dreadnought" monsters you removed from play to summon this monster.The monsters summoned by this effect are destroyed 1 turn after this effect is activated.

 

i removed the Union part of him

[The Mad Hatter]

See this is why people who can't take criticism shouldn't be allowed to post cards.

The reason I didn't fix the OCG is because I was so overwhelmed by how bad is was.

The pic would be good if you cropped the black out of it.

Now go cry to your mother about how truthful comments make you feel bad.

It isn't and never was personal, the first couple of cards made are usually bad.

[DeathstickeR]

i told you to fix the OCG because you are the only who said it was so terrible and also because i wanted to see wht you would've written. i didn't take it offensivly i just wanted better criticism. and 70% of that pic is white so im not taking the black out.