Cards Im Making....can someone rate them pls?, i spent 6hours come on

[KnightStaro]

So im newbie at this been trying for about 3weeks.. to do this stuff correctly, so dont comment on the TCG/OCG.. K thanks.

 

- Booster Structure Deck

Name: Destiny Dragons Vol 1

Maker - Me- Mathias..lol haha

The Black Hole Dragon

Effect: if this card is targeted by Monster-Effects, this ard can negate them

Atk/Def 2500/2000

Level:8

 

 

 

The Fusion Space Dragon

Atk/Def 3600/2900

Level:12

Lore: This card cannot be normal-summoned, this card can only be special summoned by fusing "The Black Hole Dragon"

+ "The Sun Dragon" + "Planet-Earth Dragon" + The Milky way Dragon.

For each dragon on the field or in both players graveyard this card gains 500 ATK/DEF per each dragon.

 

The Sun Dragon

ATK/DEF 1800/2000

Level:4

NO Lore.

 

The Milky way Dragon

ATK/DEF 1900/900

Level:4

No Lore

 

 

Trap Card

Lore: When Activated any dragon with the name "planet in it", cannot be destroyed by Monster-Effects, or Trap-Effects or Magic-Effects, Each standby phase of yours, pay 200 Life-Points to keep this card on the field.

 

 

Planet-Saturn Dragon

Level: 6

Atk/Def - 2000/2100

Lore: During Battle activate one of these following effects

(1)Raise this cards atk-points by 500 (2)Raise this cards Def-Points By 600

 

Planet-Earth Dragon

Level:8

ATK/DEF - 2600/2300

Lore: (1) When this card is face-up you can summon 3 dragons with "Planet" in its name, (2)If this card is destroyed draw 3 cards if its a dragon-type summon it to the field in def-position.

[.:Traceur:.]

hmm...

lots of OCG errors...but isn't so bed for a newbie...

the pics are nice...

just what does mean (1) in the effect?

 

overall: nice cards for a newbie..5/10

[Max Darkness]

Pics are a little overused, OCG errors, bland effects, vanillas, and don't make Divine monsters.

 

2/10

[.:Traceur:.]

Pics are a little overused' date=' OCG errors, bland effects, vanillas, and don't make Divine monsters.

 

2/10

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I agree with all just not with the vanillas...

I think it's good to see someone making vanillas...

[DMZ]

Divines are fine these days, get over it people.

 

IRT to Card maker:

Don't say "don't comment on OCG" because we always will, and in this case, it is necessary.

Fixed the OCG:

 

The Black Hole Dragon

"This card is not affected by Monster Card Effects."

 

The Fusion Space Dragon

"The Black Hole Dragon" + "The Sun Dragon" + "Planet-Earth Dragon" + "The Milky way Dragon"

For each Dragon-type monster on the field or in either Graveyard this card gains 500 ATK.

 

Planet-Dragons Unite

Dragon-type monsters with "Planet" in their names cannot be destroyed by Spell,Trap or Monster Card Effects. Pay 200 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not, this card is destroyed.

 

Planet-Saturn Dragon

During the Battle Phase you can activate one of the following effects:

-Increase this card's ATK by 500

-Increase this card's DEF By 600

 

Planet-Earth Dragon

While this card is face-up on the field you can Special Summon 3 dragons with "Planet" in their names. When this card is destroyed draw 3 cards. Special Summon any Dragon-type monsters in Defence Position to your field.

[ragnarok1945]

don't make divine types and attributes

 

many OCG errors (use OCG thread)

 

all the effects are too short and very boring

 

3/10

[KnightStaro]

lol thanks for everyone who commented...lol and i know the "ocg was wrong", thats why i said not to comment lol im a big fan of Yugioh Anyways, How are those pictures over used?, there designs you gotta pay for from Divantart...

[rehtua]

*laughs* Don't let them get you down. I was litterally told the exact same thing when I made my first cards.

*things (almost) all beginners are told about their first cards.

1. ocg sucks

2. don't make divines

3. way to op / up

[KnightStaro]

lol im not letting them get to me or anything, just asking how the images are over-used...

 

when you have to pay to get the "real size image", i hacked it, and got those images...lol

 

Anyways.. Most of those cards aren't OPed either.. the cards all been 'fit for there levels", and there effects isn't to simple.. true.. some are, but these are Prototypes, just so everyone could see the Halo Part, but i guess its not noticeable...

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Oh and for the Divine-Beast / Dragon um its a fusion of 4 dragons... so.. shouldnt it be a divine-beast since its bigger then any of the "Divine-beast's" in yugioh?, lol

[Excallibur]

6 hours, hmmm, gotta give u redit for your first try, wel all I gotta say is, I've seen worse

 

3/10

[Draemora]

The planet earth dragon seems a bit OP, 3 monsters by one effect? Also, I would consider renaming some cards. These are some ideas: Instead of Planet-Earth Dragon, Celestial Dragon - Earth and Celestial Dragon - Saturn. Here are some other names... Singularity Dragon, Reclaimer of the Cosmos, Galaxy Dragon, Celestial Dragon Nebula, etc

[Dark Lightning]

Pics are a little overused' date=' OCG errors, bland effects, vanillas, and don't make Divine monsters.

 

2/10

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All problems have been stated...And also, check your Grammer

[Max Darkness]

lol im not letting them get to me or anything' date=' just asking how the images are over-used...

 

Oh and for the Divine-Beast / Dragon um its a fusion of 4 dragons... so.. shouldnt it be a divine-beast since its bigger then any of the "Divine-beast's" in yugioh?, lol

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Over-used simply means a lot of people have used these images before.

 

So why isn't "Five Headed Dragon" a DIVINE monster, given it's a fusion of 5 dragons?