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Dr. Percival Cox

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Alrighty.... quick review, since you have an obscene amount of cards here.

 

"Divine Wrath" -- Decent card. Depends on how well you can Summon "Divine Heroes". I'll have to read the cards first... sooooo, I'll come back to this

 

SYNCHROS:

"Bright Flame" -- Easy to Summon, AND acts as "Raegeki"... which is a Banned Card. Making "Raegeki" into a Synchro Monster isn't balancing anything... it's making things worse. Especially with the re-Summoning effect. Banned.

 

"Might Wing" -- This guy is "Heavy Storm" + Beatstick + A really easy Summon = Banned.

 

"Black Blade" -- I have never seen a "Villian" monster in my life... so I don't think they've got presence in the meta... and as for "Hero" monsters, well, I only see use in "Destiny Heroes", and those guys are mostly utility... as in NOT attacking. Especially if the monster has 1800 ATK (what's "Diamond Dude's" ATK? 1400? And he's not used... as in, EVER.) As for the Equipment Effect... well, it's Aggro... and it's not great Aggro, either. I mean, on average, that's probably a 300 or 400 ATK boost... which really isn't much. He'd have to destroy at least 2 monsters just to get his own ATK up to a decent level... which means surviving 2 turns... which isn't garaunteed.

 

EFFECT MONSTERS:

"Divine Hero Captain Damon" -- This is a 1-tribute monster which cannot be destroyed by effects, has 2500 ATK, and ALSO has the added benefit of being able to Summon up to 3 Level 4 Tuner monsters..... Banned.

 

"Divine Hero Frozen Damon" -- Well, with your "Captain Damon" being Banned, this card is probably going to be useless... I see merit in the rest of his effect, though I don't know what a "Dark Divine Hero" is. More to come, I suppose?

 

"Divine Hero Sky Palidan" -- WHY would you play a Trap Card from your hand when this guy is Summoned? To negate your opponent's potential "Forced Back" or "Torrential Tribute"? Because the chances of that happening are RARE, and why wouldn't you have played the Trap Card down already, anyway... I mean, if it's a negation card.... anyway, useless.

 

"Divine Hero speed battler" -- There are those "Villains" again... where are they to be found? Other than that, the card is kind of useless, for the same reason as "Black Blade" (in respects to the whole "Hero" thing).

 

"Divine Hero Micro Zen" -- the fact that this one is a LIGHT lvl 4 Tuner is the only reason she's useful... her effect is terrible...

 

Alright, I'm done. You need to work on your cards, man. Like... badly.

 

Scrap this set. All of them. Then make some new cards (maybe with the same pictures and similar effects) but DON'T blaze through them like you did this time. Make you sure you spell words like "successfully" and "Paladin" correctly, and ONLY Make 4 or 5. THEN post them, and listen to other peoples' criticisms. CORRECT your cards, and when they're perfect, you can make more.

 

This, in my book, is the spam of cards. It's not even worth considering for realism. Not to offend... it just needs work.

 

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whats so bad about vanillas? i saw so many cards in there i was expecting at least 1 vanilla. ill tell you why theres no vanillas. because youre scared of using them. vanillas are great. please make some. remember dark magician and blue eyes? those cards are covered in yellow and still obscenly powerful. im trying not to flame, but just suggesting. apart from that, really good. id say about 8.5/10

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BUMP to tha 4th

whats so bad about vanillas? i saw so many cards in there i was expecting at least 1 vanilla. ill tell you why theres no vanillas. because youre scared of using them. vanillas are great. please make some. remember dark magician and blue eyes? those cards are covered in yellow and still obscenly powerful. im trying not to flame' date=' but just suggesting. apart from that, really good. id say about 8.5/10

[/quote'] I'm not scared of making vannila's I just don't think they would be right in the set, besides I mean seriously this set is based on EFECTS it's an Archtype they all share a common EFECT.Dark Magician and Blue Eyes were not in an Archtype these are.

Alrighty.... quick review' date=' since you have an obscene amount of cards here.

 

"Divine Wrath" -- Decent card. Depends on how well you can Summon "Divine Heroes". I'll have to read the cards first... sooooo, I'll come back to this

 

SYNCHROS:

"Bright Flame" -- Easy to Summon, AND acts as "Raegeki"... which is a Banned Card. Making "Raegeki" into a Synchro Monster isn't balancing anything... it's making things worse. Especially with the re-Summoning effect. Banned.

 

"Might Wing" -- This guy is "Heavy Storm" + Beatstick + A really easy Summon = Banned.

 

"Black Blade" -- I have never seen a "Villian" monster in my life... so I don't think they've got presence in the meta... and as for "Hero" monsters, well, I only see use in "Destiny Heroes", and those guys are mostly utility... as in NOT attacking. Especially if the monster has 1800 ATK (what's "Diamond Dude's" ATK? 1400? And he's not used... as in, EVER.) As for the Equipment Effect... well, it's Aggro... and it's not great Aggro, either. I mean, on average, that's probably a 300 or 400 ATK boost... which really isn't much. He'd have to destroy at least 2 monsters just to get his own ATK up to a decent level... which means surviving 2 turns... which isn't garaunteed.

 

EFFECT MONSTERS:

"Divine Hero Captain Damon" -- This is a 1-tribute monster which cannot be destroyed by effects, has 2500 ATK, and ALSO has the added benefit of being able to Summon up to 3 Level 4 Tuner monsters..... Banned.

 

"Divine Hero Frozen Damon" -- Well, with your "Captain Damon" being Banned, this card is probably going to be useless... I see merit in the rest of his effect, though I don't know what a "Dark Divine Hero" is. More to come, I suppose?

 

"Divine Hero Sky Palidan" -- WHY would you play a Trap Card from your hand when this guy is Summoned? To negate your opponent's potential "Forced Back" or "Torrential Tribute"? Because the chances of that happening are RARE, and why wouldn't you have played the Trap Card down already, anyway... I mean, if it's a negation card.... anyway, useless.

 

"Divine Hero speed battler" -- There are those "Villains" again... where are they to be found? Other than that, the card is kind of useless, for the same reason as "Black Blade" (in respects to the whole "Hero" thing).

 

"Divine Hero Micro Zen" -- the fact that this one is a LIGHT lvl 4 Tuner is the only reason she's useful... her effect is terrible...

 

Alright, I'm done. You need to work on your cards, man. Like... badly.

 

Scrap this set. All of them. Then make some new cards (maybe with the same pictures and similar effects) but DON'T blaze through them like you did this time. Make you sure you spell words like "successfully" and "Paladin" correctly, and ONLY Make 4 or 5. THEN post them, and listen to other peoples' criticisms. CORRECT your cards, and when they're perfect, you can make more.

 

This, in my book, is the spam of cards. It's not even worth considering for realism. Not to offend... it just needs work.

 

:mrgreen:

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God I hate doing this

Bright Flame Dragon = Stardust efect

Might Wing = IDK what beast stick is but your right about the hevy storm thing and easy summon *changing*

Black Blade = needs support cards no duh

Caotin Damon= was supposed to be changed but i did'nt want to put forth the effort. Captin Damons efect was supposed to read"When this card is summoned you can special summon 1 "Divine Hero Frozen damon from your hand or deck."

Frozen damon= was supposed to be a dark tuner MSE messed it up Dark divine Hero is a set I'm thinking of making

Sky Palidin = Like the Black Wings to play a trap like "Just Deserts" or "Jar of Greed" or even "Kunai With a Chain"

The Villians are another archtype created.

Micro Zen is a tuner no elaborate effect needed

This set is part of a way to mess uo other Archtypes being made not for real purpose there.

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if youre not going to update, please stop bumping. other people want posts on their threads so that they can get criticism. if you ask me, 2 pages is enough, so if you've bumped 5 times and the only people who have posted are you and someone not telling you to bump, i'd say this thread has had its run. Now i'm off to put the 1st bump on my thread that only has 2 criticisms on it because people like you keep bumping and keeping new threads off the top off the list.

 

and thats my daily rant.

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if youre not going to update' date=' please stop bumping. other people want posts on their threads so that they can get criticism. if you ask me, 2 pages is enough, so if you've bumped 5 times and the only people who have posted are you and someone not telling you to bump, i'd say this thread has had its run. Now i'm off to put the 1st bump on my thread that only has 2 criticisms on it because people like you keep bumping and keeping new threads off the top off the list.

 

and thats my daily rant.

[/quote'] I've only Bumped this like 4 time and this thread has been on here for lik 2 fickin weeks , so dont spam in my thread about how this is your daily rant an stfu and enjoy the cards. P.S. I Already UPDATED IT

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if youre not going to update' date=' please stop bumping. other people want posts on their threads so that they can get criticism. if you ask me, 2 pages is enough, so if you've bumped 5 times and the only people who have posted are you and someone not telling you to bump, i'd say this thread has had its run. Now i'm off to put the 1st bump on my thread that only has 2 criticisms on it because people like you keep bumping and keeping new threads off the top off the list.

 

and thats my daily rant.

[/quote'] I've only Bumped this like 4 time and this thread has been on here for lik 2 fickin weeks , so dont spam in my thread about how this is your daily rant an stfu and enjoy the cards. P.S. I Already UPDATED IT

 

youve bumped at least 5 times, and if its on top of the list with 37 comments and been here for 2 weeks, either its a really good set or mega-bumping. im not saying the cards are bad, but maybe you're cards have had their time? i mean, people are always posting. hell, i just bumped my set 5 minutes ago and within 2 minutes it was 5th on the list, 2 of which above it were bumps, 1 was our argument and the other was an update. so come on, you have enough criticism here, and if you DO update, write what you updated instead of just writing 'BUMP to tha 5th'. you've ranted me out. i dont think i can do another one today.

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if youre not going to update' date=' please stop bumping. other people want posts on their threads so that they can get criticism. if you ask me, 2 pages is enough, so if you've bumped 5 times and the only people who have posted are you and someone not telling you to bump, i'd say this thread has had its run. Now i'm off to put the 1st bump on my thread that only has 2 criticisms on it because people like you keep bumping and keeping new threads off the top off the list.

 

and thats my daily rant.

[/quote'] I've only Bumped this like 4 time and this thread has been on here for lik 2 fickin weeks , so dont spam in my thread about how this is your daily rant an stfu and enjoy the cards. P.S. I Already UPDATED IT

 

youve bumped at least 5 times, and if its on top of the list with 37 comments and been here for 2 weeks, either its a really good set or mega-bumping. im not saying the cards are bad, but maybe you're cards have had their time? i mean, people are always posting. hell, i just bumped my set 5 minutes ago and within 2 minutes it was 5th on the list, 2 of which above it were bumps, 1 was our argument and the other was an update. so come on, you have enough criticism here, and if you DO update, write what you updated instead of just writing 'BUMP to tha 5th'. you've ranted me out. i dont think i can do another one today.

First LOLZ Second Whenever I update I change the name the views,and rates are what concern me the I dont realy care for the comments themselves just the rates in them. and Third NONE shall out rant me.
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sorry if i offended you, im just getting a bit annoyed because even though people do it without noticing, lots and lots of people do it. if i offended you personally, im sorry if my short temper got the best of me. also, because people rarely post on things that dont strike them - or that other people dont post on - things rapidly descend down the page because of bumpers and whiny idiots who think they dont have enough criticism. frankly, my bumping limit is 3 before i quit unless tons of people post. if people dont, i simply make a new card or two to trick them into thinking that i made something completely new. i suppose that almost all of us do that, fair enough, but then maybe sets should wait until completion and then be posted and then be edited based around the criticism. all in all, im sorry if i annoyed you, and to all the chronic bumpers, think about the ramifications of bumping, and let someone else have a turn. Maybe some pissed off fourteen-year-old will randomly post annoyed-ly on your thread.

 

p.s. thanks to people like ragnarok1945 who post on just about everything, and get to the point quickly. you make life easier for wannabe card makers like me.

btw your cards are pretty good :P

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Last I checked you can only bump after 24 hours of no posts.

 

Because that is how I remember the rul' date=' and since I don't think it's changed, stop bumping, now.

[/quote'] That was after 24 horurs

Please learn how to tell time. None of the bumps on the past page were made after 24 hours of no posts.

 

Just look.

Will more people post?

BUMP part 2

BUMP

 

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sorry if i offended you' date=' im just getting a bit annoyed because even though people do it without noticing, lots and lots of people do it. if i offended you personally, im sorry if my short temper got the best of me. also, because people rarely post on things that dont strike them - or that other people dont post on - things rapidly descend down the page because of bumpers and whiny idiots who think they dont have enough criticism. frankly, my bumping limit is 3 before i quit unless tons of people post. if people dont, i simply make a new card or two to trick them into thinking that i made something completely new. i suppose that almost all of us do that, fair enough, but then maybe sets should wait until completion and then be posted and then be edited based around the criticism. all in all, im sorry if i annoyed you, and to all the chronic bumpers, think about the ramifications of bumping, and let someone else have a turn. Maybe some pissed off fourteen-year-old will randomly post annoyed-ly on your thread.

 

p.s. thanks to people like ragnarok1945 who post on just about everything, and get to the point quickly. you make life easier for wannabe card makers like me.

btw your cards are pretty good :P

 

 

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BUMP as in bump FTW.

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