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Starly_64 Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 I think you mean: Graveyard Attack:"Pay 100 Life Points to remove from play 1 monster from your opponent's field." Hurricane:"Activate this card if there are 2 Continuous Trap Cards on the field. Negate the effects of the Trap Cards and destroy them." Defensive Castle:"During each of your turns, if this card remains face-up on the field, you gain 500 Life Points." The Great Fire:"Once during your Main Phase, you can send 3 cards from the top of your Deck to your Graveyard to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent." Spirit Body:"Negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card and return it to the owner's hand. This card's effect cannot be negated by an effect." -The images could be better, since they are slightly pixellated. Try to upload images that have bigger image sizes.-The effects are good, but they are not so original. Try to give the cards effects that are more imaginative -The monsters (even though they are inanimate objects) are pretty underpowered when looking at their Levels. Try to give Level 5s stats between (2000-2400), unless they have a powerful effects. Overall, they are okay for a new user. Try to understand my comments, fix the effect OCG (Official Card Grammar) with my examples, and i'm sure that these card will be better. 5/10. If you want more help, PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Sorry but you need to fix your ocg alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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